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This is really great:) Poor Yugi though, he's hurting so much:( *huggles him* That's neat how Tea, Ryou and Bakura have noticed:) I hope Yami pulls that stick out of his ass and realizes that Yugi is the one he loves:) Great work:)

RD: must resist urg to bash yami must resist urge to all to hell with it COME HERE YOU GOD DAM SCUM SUCKING TRAITOR *grabs yami's neck slams him into a wall and gets right in his face* do you see what your doing you fucking moron i swear and u call yourself a pharaoh PAH yugis ten times the pharaoh you will EVER be infact his mark of a king is so great even King Author himself would acknowledge how great yugi is huh u bastard hes given u his heart in every single LAST THING HE DOES FOR YOU AND THIS IS HOW U REPAY HIM SICK thats what u are A SICK FREAK at least BAKURA acknowledges yugis heart SO WHY CANT YOU U SON OF A BITCH ditch those hussies of girlfriends of yours and concentrate on the one who matters YUGI MOUTO mark my words yami if i catch you hurting yugi again YOUR SRY ASS IS MINE GOT IT NO AND I MEAN NO ONE HURTS YUGI THE WAY U ARE(sry for all the yelling but im angry) three times now yami THREE TIMES you went against yugis wishes even AFTER u made that promise huh i swear STUPID YOUR SUCH A MORON huh well i hope your happy with ur bitches yami cuz as far as im concern even if u DO realize how precious yugi is to you i think you dont deserve the right to be near him let alone be his yami hmph well keep up the great work and update soon pls though im beyond PISSED OFF AT YAMI ill still enjoy ur work and hang in there yugi my chibitenshi your good heart will pay off and shine far greater then any on this earth well gtg now JA NE *hugs yugi and gives him a kiss on the cheek* ^__^

Oh, great start! I'm excited, because I'm evil and I LOVE Yugi angst! Mwahahaha. I hope your muses agree to update quickly...

*evil smile* I never thought I would see the day when Tea and Bakura got along, much less team up! Pls have Bakura, Tea and Marik team up with Malik and Co and get rid of Yami's girlfriend! *fuming over Yugi's tears* I hate it when Yami makes Yugi cry! Good thing it's not Tea! Sometimes i get tired of all those Tea being evil stories... Since Tea's nice in both the anime and the manga! What's wrong with friendships? If everyone were alone, there'ld be plenty of suicidal people and more school violence in the world! Ex- Columbine. According to the newspaper, too many of the shooters were loners!

Good story! I can't wait for more! Yami needs to kick her out of his life because she is a bitch.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!

Hehe, you're doing great hun, and I can't wait to see where you take this.

Drac and her muses

Brilliant..very well written and excellently done :)

Looking forward to more :) *whaps Drac*

need mooooorrrrrrreeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Update soon please!..^^