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for Invisible Me

by LadyLaran

person DracOnyx
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, hun, as I said. Absolutely loved it.
person vampslyr
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was great! I especially love how you've written Tea. I've never understood why so many people want to bash her in their stories; seeing her being supportive of my favorite couple and in such a spirited way is a real treat. Hehe, personally, I would have slapped Sachi's face the moment the bitch opened her mouth in the first chapter (nice way to establish the bad guy btw). 'Course that could just be because I love reading so much. Being a geek rocks. This chapter was definatly worth waiting for and I can't wait for the next.
-vampslyr
person Arainaina
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh very interesting I sure hope you update soon I wish to see what happens next for I can't believe Yami's being such a baka right now to yugi oh please update soon so i might see what happens
person Dark Pearl
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you are so mean!! I feel so sorry for yugi! More please MORE!!!!
person Kat1132
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait until you update this one! It's amazing! Update soon!
person Maggiemay
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start. I am looking forward to your updates.
person LadyNight
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was awsome! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Loki
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great beginning! Please please continue, as soon as possible....oh, and if you're such a wonderful author that you're taking reviewer requests....please make Sachi die a horrible painful death or suffer a disfiguring maiming of some kind. Hopefully caused by Bakura. Thanks! Great story!

~Loki
person AngelViper9
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is Great!! Anzu actually has a back bone in it!! I hope you update soon!! Such lovely Yugi/Yami tuture!
person Reyn
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo! This story looks promising! Very promising! So promising, that I'll promise to review every chapter if you promise to update frequently ^_^