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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story. i like it i can actually see the pain yugi is in i hope you update soon
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Tea, she really kicked butt out there. I sure hope the others are able to help Yugi and like bakura said get Yami's head out of his ass. I so can not believe Yami's behavior around Yugi. Poor Yugi. *sniffs* Anyway, very good I really liked and I hope you update soon for this is very good and exciting that I can't wait to see what happens next.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is such a cool story, please update ASAP. This just SCREAMS dramatic angst which I just so happen to love, and there is the promise of shounen ai/yaoi in the future, which I am a total slave for. I avidly await an update! More more more!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic beginning! The characters are always fun, but the details you employ really help the reader see them! Keep up the great work, I hope to read more soon!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still going great!! I think you got my muse going *LOL*..or at least out of the damned pool! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well,this is interesting. I'm glad you finally updated, and I am SO pleased with the charaterizations. I hope the muses keep their end up!
Update when you can please!
Update when you can please!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start!
I really like the way you have portrayed the characters. Usually I don't like Tea but you have written her in a way that I like and appreciate.
I'm looking forward to your updates.
I really like the way you have portrayed the characters. Usually I don't like Tea but you have written her in a way that I like and appreciate.
I'm looking forward to your updates.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was quite nice....it is well written....you can really feel Yugi's pain....I like how you have the other hikaris and yamis actually helping Yugi out....hope to see another update really soon....catti
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and way to go Tea! Put that bitch in her place! Lol:P And wake up Yami! *slaps him*
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really like this, it's great. Normally I don;t like Tea, but I really like her in this one. Keep up the good work!