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Hey, thanks for the email! Although it took me a while to remember what 'Invisible Me' was. (I read over a wide expanse of fanfiction from Harry Potter to a bunch of anime) But, once it clicked I did this little happy jump/cheer in my chair and dashed on over to aff.net

Anyways, I can't wait to see Sachi (or however you spell her name) go down. I hope Yugi's friends don't force Yami on him though...I'd kind of like to see Yami notice Yugi's pain on his own. And then I'd like to see Yami feel like completely and total shit for being the cause of all that pain. (So says the sadistic side of me ^_^)

Oh my goodness! This is awesome! I was laughing so hard reading about what Kura and the gang are plotting...I'm psyched to see the bitch go down and go down hard:P Also loved the line, "pull the pharaoh's head out of his ass." ROFL:P Great writing, and my goodness, is it suspenseful! Die Sachi! *evil laughter* And wake up Yami! *dope slaps him*

LOVED IT! But then again, you already knew that hun. Wonderful chapter.

Drac and her muse

Thank you for telling me when you updated! It was awesome! I love this story. I can't believe you left us hanging though. You said it's your favorite, ne? Then write more damnit! I need more! Please update soon!

Okay....that was sad, poor Yugi..its a great story update soon..catti

Yes! Now that they have the problem solved, they can get the solution. The only flaw I can find is the phrase 'pull the pharaoh's head out of his ass'. Apt as it may be, it is kind of overused. Other than that, great chapter and I can't wait for the update!

I love this story!! I can't wait to see what Kura, Ryou, Malik, Marik, and Tea come up with to take Sachi (THE BITCH!!!) down and make Yami see how much he has hurt Yugi! I hope that you make Yami suffer for being so stupid and for the heartache he has caused his hikari. Let me know when you update this one or any of your other stories!!

*whistles* I have to agree! *ponders on Tea's outburst. Hm, looks like someone've been spending too much time with Bakura and Marik! Pls throw Marik and Malik in this! I'm certain that Marik and Malik might have some ideas on how to torture Sachi!

I am a newbie to both anime/manga fanfic and to writing reviews, so please excuse my writing. I would like to thank you for sharing your story and encourage you to continue it. I really enjoy your writing and the story line; it has really drawn me in. I like the use of Yugi's drawings to show his state of mind. I also like your depiction of Tea -- she is not the most exciting of characters, but most YuGiOh fanfics I have read are quite unkind to her. One thing you might address -- how has Yugi been able to keep his thoughts/feelings secret from Yami? Is he simply repressing them or is it that Yami has been neglecting the link? I hope you write more soon -- at this point I want to kick Yami for his treatment of Yugi -- I'm looking forward to seeing his POV and learning why he is so lost.

Poor Yugi! wah!

Hey, if you have a mailing list going around for this story, can I be put on it? I like to try to keep up with the stories I like here on aff.net