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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An intellgent plot! Way to go, Laran! My hat's off to your muses and to you...this is probably the most realistic story where people are trying to get people together that I have ever seen. Excellent writitng, and well paced. I loved how real and dynamic you made the conversation. Please update when you can!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh! I wanna know what happend! Yami needs to be beaten!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE! *rolling around on the floor* This fic is really good for a traditional one!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic! Can't wait to see what happens to Yami now! Please add me to the contact list at the above email...I'd love to be able to keep up with all your wonderful stories! Thanks!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait til the next chapter, post it up as soon as you can!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh, that was almost a teaser! It was a good chappie, but it was short! What will it take for you to write long chapters? How about... /Digs in pockets/ $10,000!
(Cody's Muse)- O_o! Where the HELL did you get...?!?! /looks closer at money/ Uh Cody, that's Monopoly money...
(Cody)- Oh, oops. ^_^' /Tosses Money over shoulder/ Ok then, how about my Kuroneko-sama!
(Cody's Muse)- u_u' Cody, That's your cat Diana..."
(Diana)- =^_^= MEW
(Cody)- OH fine then! /Tosses Diana over shoulder./
(Diana)- =0_0= MEEEEOOOOOWWWW!
(Cody's muse)- 'Sigh' -_-' /Catches Diana on a comfy pillow/ 6_6 Be more careful with living things will you?
(Cody)- I'LL GIVE YOU EVERY BISHIE IN THE ENTIRE ANIME AND MANGA UNIVERSE!
(Cody's Muse)- 9_9 Ok, now you're just dreaming.
(Cody)- MUST YOU CRUSH ALL MY HOPES AND DREAMS YOU SELF ABSORBED HARPIE?!?!?
(Cody's Muse)- Yes. Now grovel in the dirt like every other reviewer has to do and stop acting like an idiot or she's gonna think you're a mental case...
(Cody) But the doctor said...
(Cody's Muse) I KNOW WHAT HE SAID! HE SAID YOU HAVE 'DIFFICULTY' DISTINGUISHING FANTASY FROM REALITY AND YOU DO! YOU ARE HAVING A FLIPPING ONLINE ARGUMENT WITH ME AND I ONLY EXIST IN YOUR MIND!!! NOW REWIEW THE STORY SO THE POOR AUTHOR CAN GET BACK TO HER LIFE!!!
(Cody)- I really like your story, and I'm glad you updated and sent me emails, I hope you post the next chappie really really soon and that's it's longer! Thank you for posting more, I'll be back! Ja ne!
(Cody's Muse)- There, was that so hard? /I can't believe she takes oders from non-existent voices in her head.../v_v Thank you for the update, we await the next installment eagerly. and I appologize that she's so loopy tonight, she's running on two weeks of sleep depravation and chocolate, please forgive us, have a lovely night.
(Cody's Muse)- O_o! Where the HELL did you get...?!?! /looks closer at money/ Uh Cody, that's Monopoly money...
(Cody)- Oh, oops. ^_^' /Tosses Money over shoulder/ Ok then, how about my Kuroneko-sama!
(Cody's Muse)- u_u' Cody, That's your cat Diana..."
(Diana)- =^_^= MEW
(Cody)- OH fine then! /Tosses Diana over shoulder./
(Diana)- =0_0= MEEEEOOOOOWWWW!
(Cody's muse)- 'Sigh' -_-' /Catches Diana on a comfy pillow/ 6_6 Be more careful with living things will you?
(Cody)- I'LL GIVE YOU EVERY BISHIE IN THE ENTIRE ANIME AND MANGA UNIVERSE!
(Cody's Muse)- 9_9 Ok, now you're just dreaming.
(Cody)- MUST YOU CRUSH ALL MY HOPES AND DREAMS YOU SELF ABSORBED HARPIE?!?!?
(Cody's Muse)- Yes. Now grovel in the dirt like every other reviewer has to do and stop acting like an idiot or she's gonna think you're a mental case...
(Cody) But the doctor said...
(Cody's Muse) I KNOW WHAT HE SAID! HE SAID YOU HAVE 'DIFFICULTY' DISTINGUISHING FANTASY FROM REALITY AND YOU DO! YOU ARE HAVING A FLIPPING ONLINE ARGUMENT WITH ME AND I ONLY EXIST IN YOUR MIND!!! NOW REWIEW THE STORY SO THE POOR AUTHOR CAN GET BACK TO HER LIFE!!!
(Cody)- I really like your story, and I'm glad you updated and sent me emails, I hope you post the next chappie really really soon and that's it's longer! Thank you for posting more, I'll be back! Ja ne!
(Cody's Muse)- There, was that so hard? /I can't believe she takes oders from non-existent voices in her head.../v_v Thank you for the update, we await the next installment eagerly. and I appologize that she's so loopy tonight, she's running on two weeks of sleep depravation and chocolate, please forgive us, have a lovely night.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*strifling giggles* this IS going to be GOOD! *muses* A pity, Joey, Seto, Tristan and Duke haven't goteen in the act. Pls pair Joey and Seto up! Ditto for Tristan and Duke! *LOL* I can SEE that Ri and Kura cannot pass the opportunity to pull Atemu's head out of his ass! *ponders* But, I don't get it, how can Atemu be SO blind to Yugi's pain? I thought he was this ALL-knowing pharaoh?! *snickering* Way to go Yugi! You stood up to Marik! But, I want artwork of that scene! Same goes for Tea and Malik's pranks! I can JUST see the pure mayhem!
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chappie. Hmmm....is Yami being willfully blind or is he just ...stupid. Because it really isn't like him to ignore Yugi like he is. Does he have a motivation?
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blushes!* I can't believe I was a sort of inspiration. Good work, I'm enjoying this. *^-^*
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya, I'm very impressed with this story and I'm just sorry I didn't start reading it sooner -- please add me to your update list! Now I'm off to check out your other stories. Oh, and I loved the idea of Yami and Yugi having bunk beds, can't recall reading having seen it before and it made me giggle. Ja ne!