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for Shower me with your Love

by nickylein

person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story hun..I liked the warning...though I doubt 'kids' would of heard of this site anyway..lol
person kaibasbabe
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story, damn if i had a shower scene like that i would die happy
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I like how Jou ran to Honda, babbled, confused the hell out of him, and then Jou ran off
(like the hard headed lovable dork he is) to find Seto. I laughed really hard when Jou said 'Wanna share my soap?' because I could just imagine the way he might have said it- it cracked me up. ^___^ -Shadow Wings
person icestar
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh, amusing. ^_^ good choice jou!

anyway, nice story. ^_^ imagine if honda actually figured it out :sniggers:
person Lee
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The moment that I read Honda's statement of disbelief of having sex first, I knew what was going to happen between Jou and Kaiba. I'm so happy that you didn't disappoint. I loved this story. Not the best lemon ever written, but it certainly hit the spot. Good luck with the rest of your writing.
person Akela
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Omg! the bunny is soooo cute! ive got to remember how to do this!
great fic, showerboys make things hot!
person J.S.
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol
ok....i wont seduce my secret crush in da skool showers....mayb somewhere else? o.O
i liked da fic
u should make a sequel
person Akela
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! stupid computer moved the (^) ears and feet back! damn!, well, its still cute...
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really nice fics you got there, and a Jou really persuasive. *giggle*