rate_review Reviews

Me once again, Nicky. I was right about you... You're a very good writer. i kept wondering if someone was going to walk in on the couple though... That would have been very close to hell for both of them. It is funny when you think about the fact that everything seems to make sense when you leave Logic out of it... Even though it doesn't... Uh, you wrote it so I bet you get what I mean. Well... Let's see if you have any more of these fics...Hmm. Awesome story, once more, definately worthy of being on my best author list. See ya round.

I loved it! The scene where Jou asks Honda's advice is great; I laughed my ass off. Perfect. Also, I loved the whole thing with the soap--who would have thought Jou smelled like apples? It was hot and well written, I thouroughly enjoyed it.

I liked this. It was short, but well-written and completely understandable and cohesive. I liked how you had Jou circle around back to that whole 'sex-before-date' thing at the end. That was pretty neat.

By the way, I thought that was very mature of you to note that what happened in this story is not the way the world works. Most authors neglect to mention that, and after reading hundreds, if not thousands of fics where two of the characters get together and have sex rather quickly, it makes the whole sex-right-away thing seem realistic. Thank you for pointing out that these fics do NOT portray the real world, because I am sure that there are some people who do not realize this (especially if there are underage kids on this site [which there probably are] who were never taught this).

Overall, awesome job! *two thumbs up*

Oh yeah...I've been drifting away from the yugioh fandom (I miss it I do...) Anyway I stumbled upon this and I am so glad! Really cute premise, and the lemon...hot. And I don't even read that many lemons, nevermind enjoy them, but this one was just perfect. Good job! Mmm...I miss my Seto/Jou. *sigh*

^____^ Heeheheee. Not my favorite - that one hasn't been released yet - but i still always love it. I'm not around this site very often so it took me a while to come see it. But as always, your writing makes my stomach do that little twisty thing. lovies always kitten

Ha...i get it...have sex frist and then go out...i liked this story..very well written too.

Thank you for the wonderful read.

Maggiemay

aww...seto x joey lemon!!!! This was really good. I think i remember reviewing something of yours before...I think. It's been a while since I've had a chance to read anything thanks to work and doc's appts. *sigh* Very well done

HOT HOT HOT!

LOVE IT! Seto and Jou (Joey) are so HOT!