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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story i'm glad everything worked out in the end.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the most beautiful and coolest yaoi story i have ever read keep on writing you rock
i am in love with this story
i am in love with this story
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet story.
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was just *sobs* wonderful!
i adored this fic. You write beautifully.
i adored this fic. You write beautifully.
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. You've given Jou a brand new and totally out there past. A little grittier than what I normally like and kinda cliche',but I still really liked it!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, great plot, great pairing!
You did a really amazing job with this, and I'm glad I read it. I hope to see more from you!
You did a really amazing job with this, and I'm glad I read it. I hope to see more from you!
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was wonderful! I loved every second of it! Your writting style is wonderful and i loved the concept you used! You should write a follow up to this story! Have the wedding or after they are married! It would be just so kawaii! ^__^ Think about it okay?
JA NE!
~Kerurie
JA NE!
~Kerurie
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I love you for writing this. Seriously. Reading this story was the best thing about my entire day yesterday (not that that's saying much considering the day I'd been having), and it really helped to cheer me up. I particularly liked your realistic portrayals, not just of the abuse and such, but of the relationship itself by not making either one of them into a clear dom or sub. They're really not like that, and it was very refreshing to see that you didn't fall into that trap. ^-^ And beyond that I don't really have anything constructive to say. I just really liked the story. So thank you for writing it!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!! That ending screams, no demands that you make a sequal. You have to for the sake of my sanity, your writing style is one of the best I have read and I wanna see a sequal to it!!!! PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL!!!!!
~!~Adam~!~
~!~Adam~!~
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy. Crap. This was seriously, one of the best Seto/Jou fics I've read. It goes right up there with some of the best fics I've ever read. Your writing is amazing, the way you can write emotion and twist storylines around. Everything was incredibly realistic too, unlike many fics out there. I just hope you continue to write like this; you have amazing potential. All I can leave you with is that I'm sorry to see this end, but it made my really horrible week so much better. Please, write more!
-Sparx539
-Sparx539