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July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I'm just sorry I don't have anything useful to say right now, but it was really good. I'll be reading your others now.
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March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok so ... you've said that this was your first story.
And you know? it's true that it's WAFFy and swoony and kinda girly, but it's also sweet and well-enough written that I STAYED WITH IT for all 16 chapters. ~ That definitely counts for something, and I look forward to seeing how your work progresses. :)
And you know? it's true that it's WAFFy and swoony and kinda girly, but it's also sweet and well-enough written that I STAYED WITH IT for all 16 chapters. ~ That definitely counts for something, and I look forward to seeing how your work progresses. :)
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was great!!
Poor, poor Jou! Though, I was wondering why he didn't 'just' steal some food?
Mokuba was fantastic, and Kaiba's reactions to his own emotions were great.
Love Jou, but that, I always do XD
Thank you so so much for the fic!
Poor, poor Jou! Though, I was wondering why he didn't 'just' steal some food?
Mokuba was fantastic, and Kaiba's reactions to his own emotions were great.
Love Jou, but that, I always do XD
Thank you so so much for the fic!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn. That was lovely.
So well done, you made me cry on three separate occasions in the fic.
So well done, you made me cry on three separate occasions in the fic.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That fic was just.... wow! I HATE and LOATHE when fics are about rape and all that stuff but... that one was the most beautiful and cute story I ever seen! I wasn't able to stop reading even with the rape parts, and that's not me at all. Usually, I'm just not able to endure it, too much pain I presume! Anyway, you really are a awesome author and I hope that you will continue your good work!
Shinia X3
PS: Sorry if you see some mistakes, I'm French! ^_^ But I'm almost bilingual! (almost...)
Shinia X3
PS: Sorry if you see some mistakes, I'm French! ^_^ But I'm almost bilingual! (almost...)
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I should be sleeping right now but your story kept me awake, excellent work on this. Pepe, sounds so cute. And they're getting married. I love angsty stories like this and you kept the angst up all the way through. Wonderful
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! that is the most happiest ending I have read for a while!!! but it was full of twists and turns tso that byou couldn't guess which way it went...
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, this story was fabulous! so sweet. ^^
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My expressions throughout this fic:
O.O
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BEAUTIFUL!!!! I LOVED IT!! WELL DONE!!!!
O.O
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BEAUTIFUL!!!! I LOVED IT!! WELL DONE!!!!
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gomen nasai; I know you wrote this a while ago but I have just recently delved into the yaoi world of Yugioh and I must say this story was beyond fabulous...this was well-written, sensual, and just fantastic...it is probably one of the best J/S yaoi I have read!!!....catti