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for Thin Line

by Rroselavy

person Anon
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I'm just sorry I don't have anything useful to say right now, but it was really good. I'll be reading your others now.
person Animom57
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok so ... you've said that this was your first story.

And you know? it's true that it's WAFFy and swoony and kinda girly, but it's also sweet and well-enough written that I STAYED WITH IT for all 16 chapters. ~ That definitely counts for something, and I look forward to seeing how your work progresses. :)
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was great!!
Poor, poor Jou! Though, I was wondering why he didn't 'just' steal some food?
Mokuba was fantastic, and Kaiba's reactions to his own emotions were great.
Love Jou, but that, I always do XD
Thank you so so much for the fic!
person Luca
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn. That was lovely.

So well done, you made me cry on three separate occasions in the fic.
person Shinia
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That fic was just.... wow! I HATE and LOATHE when fics are about rape and all that stuff but... that one was the most beautiful and cute story I ever seen! I wasn't able to stop reading even with the rape parts, and that's not me at all. Usually, I'm just not able to endure it, too much pain I presume! Anyway, you really are a awesome author and I hope that you will continue your good work!

Shinia X3

PS: Sorry if you see some mistakes, I'm French! ^_^ But I'm almost bilingual! (almost...)
person freewater
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I should be sleeping right now but your story kept me awake, excellent work on this. Pepe, sounds so cute. And they're getting married. I love angsty stories like this and you kept the angst up all the way through. Wonderful
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! that is the most happiest ending I have read for a while!!! but it was full of twists and turns tso that byou couldn't guess which way it went...
person nocturne
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, this story was fabulous! so sweet. ^^
person Jodine16 (not logged in)
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My expressions throughout this fic:
O.O

O.o

^^

^o^

:'(

^^

O.O

BEAUTIFUL!!!! I LOVED IT!! WELL DONE!!!!
person catti-dono
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gomen nasai; I know you wrote this a while ago but I have just recently delved into the yaoi world of Yugioh and I must say this story was beyond fabulous...this was well-written, sensual, and just fantastic...it is probably one of the best J/S yaoi I have read!!!....catti