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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm. =/ It was rather blandly written, really. The sex scene especially lacked detail, and left much to be desired. Try using a less terse and boring writing style. Creativity can make even the most pointless smut scene seem wonderful.
And, just to let you know, it's "CEO", not "CFO".
And, just to let you know, it's "CEO", not "CFO".
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where's the rest of it!? I love Yugi/Yamix Anzu stuff!^_^ It better be really good "things" happening between them in the next chapter...Please(gives cute puppy dog face) By the way, nice job on the fic! I like it!^_^