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cool please continue

its needs a sequel!!!!! it also needs a juicier make up sex scene!!!

Very good! Do as you wish with the expanding. By the way I think you meant "orgasm".

This is sooooooo sad.

Like it's totally clear that they won't stay together and it's never gonna work even if they tried...

their reasons for the break-ups though... hmm... I don't know how to say that... they're all reasons that could be solved easily... so, I've got the impression either their reasons don't fit with the rest of the story or Seto and Jou are just incredibly immature in this fic.

OMG. Please expand this. I've read so much smut and sap with this couple, I'm in the mood for a difficult relationship fic (of course with Seto x Jou, it's always difficult, but you actually have a great plot!) Hope you update soon.

Cheeto flavored babies? Im not even going to ask the meaning behind that!!!
However strange your inside jokes may be...its a great story, and i think it could be more than just a one shot!