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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice, u don't really see too much creativity with some genras. take a look at ur grammar in some places, some spelling, and word phrasing. keep on going the way u are. u could really devolope a voice in ur writting if u keep going. let me know the next time u update.
later,
chris
later,
chris
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wait... is this how your going to end it?
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If you end the story at five chaprters there is going to be some major blood shed!! Starting with SETO!!! * holds knife to Seto, the others are tied in the back* not only that but i'm begging you!!! DONT STOP WRITING!!!! NEVER EVER EVER EVER!! well except if you die...
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It's got a very ingenius plot line. I'd be interested in seeing where it goes. Please keep writing.
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was such a cool fanfic. You are going to write more? Please do it would be so cool.
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just read the first 5 chapter of this story and I think it's great!!! I'm a little upset that she had to back. I mean, she didn't even have Pippin. AHHH!!! oh well update soon!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooo
amber isnt in ancient egypt anymore
poor yami
update soon
cant wait 2 read more
p.s. glad dat im not da only 1 who is reviewing, da story is gud, keep writing
amber isnt in ancient egypt anymore
poor yami
update soon
cant wait 2 read more
p.s. glad dat im not da only 1 who is reviewing, da story is gud, keep writing
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU CAN'T STOP THERE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?!?!?!?!?
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like dis fic even though i dont usually read oc pairings...
dis 1 is quite gud though
i like it
update soon
dis 1 is quite gud though
i like it
update soon
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i quite like da fic
i like da fact dat yami (atemu) and yugi r brothers
its different
hope u update soon
id like 2 read more
ps. i hope dis fic doesnt end sadly...i dont like sad ficts T.T
i like da fact dat yami (atemu) and yugi r brothers
its different
hope u update soon
id like 2 read more
ps. i hope dis fic doesnt end sadly...i dont like sad ficts T.T