rate_review Reviews

sad. i like your comparisons of cultures

i hate doing this: HURRY AND UPDATE!

i normally only read yaoi white joey in it but when i sa the name of the oc i couldent resist reading it
my name is amber tada
and i like your story keep going your good fic

what can I say? You are possibly one of the best (if not the best) writers out there! I love your character, her sharp wit, and her stubborness with Yami!!! I also adore the time-travel thing!! I hope you are thinking of having her bring items/ knowledge from the future like guns, dvd player, clothes, things etc!!!! That would be so great!!!! BTW how did she figure it out? Love ya bye! Please update!

Good good you updated! *Drops knife and unties Seto* Go free little human, go free!

Seto: god Your crazy!

Sk: I know!

Seto: Shit, Yami get over here and take care of your girlfriend!

Sk: *just as Yami yells, "She Is not even!"* I am not his girlfriend!

Yami: *walks in* jeez, get Inuyasha to take care of her!

Sk: NO! *Picks knif back up, holds it back to Seto's throat. Holding his arms behind his back* Stay back Evil Hanyou!!

Seto: Fuck! now look what you did!!

Sk: Hush you!

Anyways Update soon! And I'm glad I made you laugh! I try to make people laugh... but It's not that hard really... Cya!

lol

I'm hooked!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

AHHH!!! damn u! i hate it when ppl leave a clifhanger! geez! update soon for all us poor souls who must wait.

later,
chris

People please.. you need to be calm, cool, and collective...

*throws himself down* Please don't stop now, please!!!

*gets up* See? Calm.. collective...

You should continue this! You are a great writer, although the story could use some formatting, I really like the way you write.

Please update soon!

PUH-LEASE!

See. You were begging for reviews and now we're begging for updates..