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for Immortal

by Ykarzel

person Anon
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i believe this is the sadest story i've ever read, and probably the most imprinted on into my mind
person Kiweeo
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was too beautiful to describe. The idea, the way you wrote it, how you expressed everything... beyond words...
person I_am_Millie_Ishtar_Motou
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is so sad if I read anymore I would've cried!
person Darkstar
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....why did u have to make it so sad!!!
person daisey
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**stands and applauds Ykarzel** This was wonderful... sad, yes... but wonderful nonetheless. As you know from my posts at the lair, I am a self proclaimed angst wimp but, upon seeing your name attached to this, I couldn't stay away. Not only is it well written as usual, but the plot is something that I know ~I've~ never seen before. Kudos to you, Ykarzel, for another delightful story to add to your collection and to my favorite list.
person UkeToSetosSeme
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg...that is so sad. *wipes her still crying eyes* That was very well written. I don't usually cry at fics either.
person wisian
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say that you are an esplendid writer. It actually made me cry--- you portray his pain in a beautiful manner; and made them act as real humans in such a short story. I hope you keep on writing, I know I am looking forward for more of your work. Thanks for letting us read your stories.

---Wisian