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as i have said before... this is the first vampire yaoi i've read *tear* im so happy.... and i really like the little things you put in after and before each chapter1^^ they're so damn funny! (had me cracking up for evers) oh.... and thank you SO MUCH for torturing yugi's evil unworthy horrendous.... *trails out with calling him bad names and stuff* anyways..... thanks! ......oh..... and when are they gonna 'make it'? (lol) [can't wait for the part on getting yugi's soulk back, too!:)]

Oh my gosh how could you end there!!!!!!!!!!!
evil cliff hangers!!! god knows why authors love cliff hangers!!!

update soon please!! i beg you!!!

bye

OMG!!! What happen next? And Please don't hurt Yugi at least not in this fic anymore...Poor Yugi. Please update as soon as you can. ja ne

I like it so far, please continue

Good chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat now! Keep it up!

this is really good I can't wait for the next chapter.

RD: permit me to warn you all before i proceed this next few seconds will be filled to the brim with violence and gore and just plain nasty stuff so if u have a stomach that is not fit for this kinda of thing i highly suggest you not read my review i repeat "DO NOT READ MY REVIEW" thank you *grabs pegasas by the neck then yugis uncle then she chains them to the walls and grabs two metal barrels containing pure 100% raw acid and jugs it all down there throats burning there organs and what not to mush then grabs a pair of gack guns puts its at point blank range to there heads and fires the gun till they have bullest comming out of there ears and eyes then she grabs a finely sharpen dagger and skins off every single piece of flesh on there bodies then shoves it all down there throats then she rips out there eyes hair chops off there feet and hands chopps them up bones and all into tiny pieces then crams that also in there mouths then pulls out bothe there hearts and puts them in a container for later then she breaks open there skulls pulls out there brains and also keeps that in another container for later then finally launches devestating diseases to turn whats left of them into skeletons then she takes pieces of there broken skulls to use for controling there bodies to do her bidding then she rips out there souls and takes them there minds and hearts and fills them with all the hurt and suffering and pain they put yugi through but a thousan times more severe so there hearts spirit and minds would know what they put yugi through and made sure there bodies felt every last sting then she locked up there brains hearts and souls to be tortured with later*hmm that should do it for now and like i said everyone if u are not a gore lover then do not read what i just wrote i only gave those god dam scum sucking sobs of the worst sort what they so richly deserve to put yugi through that hell and they have the nerve to call YAMI a monster thats nothing compared to what those two did huh talk about greedy selfish dirty wrotten scumm sucking GOD DAM FUCKING PIG ASS SOBS sry i know harsh language but what can i tell ya im FUCKING PISSED NO ONE DOES THAT TO YUGI AND LIVES as u saw if u did read my review i wll SLAUGHTER any and all who dare lay a hand of harm upon that boy hehe hell i would make bakura and marik very proud with how violent i can get huh well KITG keep up the great work oh and boys here try this one on for size * hands them a blue glowing crystal the size of a water drop*just plop that down her throat and she will be back up good as new well update soon KITG gtg now JA NE ^__^

I wish for more! please I love it !!!!!

Great chapter!! I can't wait to see what will happen next! I hope that you post soon. Keep up the good work!

RD: god that is absolutely disgusting how can they live with themselves knowing what there doing hmph i swear and ppl say vampires are monsters heh there not the monsters we are hunting them down in cold blood just because they are doing what they have to to survive and then pegesas so much for being a person who destroys evil he is evil hurting yugi like that what kind of sick twisted demon hurts an innocent kid like yugi grrr *black aura wraps around her and her hurtels her powers at pegasas the hunters and yugi's uncle till there completly destroyed painfully* huh too bad i cant have the satisfaction of doing this personally but w/e at least yami will get that chance bastards gtg now keep up the great work and update soon JA NE ^__^