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Bows to the great one.......beating head on the floor again and again out of the deepest respect....

*sighs in happyness* Thank you sooooo much. Seto is on Atemu's side this time, YES. It's really nice to be able to read at last sometimes stories where Seto is not portrayed as the betrayer of everything but as a true and loyal friend of Atemu. ^^ So, I am very thankful here for that scene. ^^

And now I am looking happily forward to read more of Atemu and Yuugi. ^^


*UsagiLovesDuochan /`^_^´\

RD: hmph its like ive been saying all along yami your not a monster cuz you nor any other vampire all the way up to dracula can help who they are nor help how they live its just there nature believe me theyd give up an arm and a wing to not have to drink blood to live buts just not that simple unfortunately *hears yelling as the DM chases the DMG again* *rolls her eyes* ok thats its MAGICIAN OF BLACK CHAOS*the MBC appears next to her*

MBC:yes mistress

RD: do something to control that apprentice of yours so much for being one of rules and contuct

MBC: of course *waits and until the dmg runs by then he sticks his staff out and trips the DM

DM: ow what was*looks at who tripped him then gasps and kneels respectfully* Master Chaos

MBC: there thats more like now DM get some self control you know how carefree mana is

DM:yes Master Chaos

MBC:hmph and you call yourself a being of rules and conduct but you dont see me tearing off after you to behave now as for your apprentice *looks over to mana who is hiding behind me* mana get over here at once and stop using my mistress as your shield

Mana: ok master chaos*walks over to MBC*

MBC: now i expect to see u two puts some self control in got that or ill have mistress KITG permit me to pay her a visit to make sure she has some order around her stories understand

DM&DMG:yes master chaos

MBC: good now Red Dragon you were saying

RD: thank you MBC now KITG you heard my mage if u need help keep those two in line you just let me know ill send my magician to straighten them out and i could always call on the Winged Dragon Of Ra to help as well im sure the last thing those two want is to anger there god hehe now onto more important matters great chappie im so happy for yami and yugi they deserve to be happy its not right for them to have to go through so much turmoil well keep up the great work KITG and updaet soon gtg now JA NE ^__^

more.

yay they are alive
one question: you in know Yami is immortal, what is he going to do when Yugi grows old and dies?
please will the next chapter be out soon

RD:no i was quite happy at taking a crack at that sick twisted fuck of a man thats for sure hehe and im happy to help ya KITG and do tell me bakura how did u like my lil torture session with pegasas and yugis uncle quite impressive huh guess it goes to show you piss me off u will regret it and now that yugis uncle is out of the way i can focus my attention on that GOD DAM STRAIGHT NUT CASE PREMADONA FRUITCAKE(hehe i got that straight A nut Case and premadona part from joey cuz he fit pegasas to a pin)*pulls out her whips drags pegasas over to her torture chamber then chains him to a wall then she pulls a rope that sends a horde of Scarabs down on him till hes nothing but bloody bones she then brings him back to life but the pain of his death before still fresh in his mind heart and soul then she puts a finger on his forhead and sets his brain on fire then brings him back to life with the pain still there then she rips off his hands and feet then then rips off his nose cuts off his mouth and then rips off his head then she brings back to life for one final time then she summons up her magic to slowly and painfully rip his mind and body to pieces and to keep repeating the process for a solid three hundred years then leaves him to her magics devices while the room is consumed by his screaming*ah i feel much better now that i took care of those two bastards hmph ive said before and ill say it again those dam haywired fuckterds think that yami is a monster AT LEAST HE DOSNT TAKE HIS ANGER AND FRUSTRATION OUT ON AN INNOCENT KID U TWISTED GOD DAM MOTHER FUCKING SCUM SUCKING DEMENTED FUCKERS (sry for the foul language) huh ok im done yelling now but pls KITG get yugi back he must come back he must cuz if he dosnt ill oh i dont know maybe ill just have some "playtime with bakura and marik and pegasas and darts and semi so for yami and seto cuz they were totally nasty to yugi but they still need to be taught a lesson and ill teach them that lesson myself so if u DONT want to see yourselves in MY torture chamber boys i highly recommend ya tell KITG to see to it that yugi comes back CUZ IM ON A TEETERING EDGE HERE BOYS huh gtg now keep up the great work KITG and update soon JA NE ^__^

OH MY GOD!!! THAT IS SUCH A GREAT STORY!!! I hope to see more soon!! ^_^ I just totally love it!! ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE!! ^_^

please save him Yami

WAIT A MINUTE !!!! GODDAMNIT!! I DID REVIEW YOU!!!!! *damn toaster for brains*

luvs

Once again, a wonderful chapter. But I've been noticing a lot of mistakes in both spelling and grammar. Those make your wonderful plot hard to read. It takes time for someone to get through them. Usually when I find a story like this I do not read it. Your plot has intrigued me, but I would reccomend that you find someone to beta your work. If you can't find someone, I am more than willing to do so for you. It's a great story, and it will only get better with some corrections.

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