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Grrrr...I will kill that bitch!!! DIE RUIA(?)!!! PLease update as soon as you can. Ja

cool hurry up and update I like it very much

GRR cliffy
I hope this is update
sooon!
I wants to know if the kill ruia ...

RD: hey KITG glad u could update its been awhile oh hey question mind if i finish Rui off after hearing all the horrible things that bitch did to yami and galen well its safe to say im not happy and you know how i get when im not happy KITG oh and as for those nightmares of yours here * hands her two insent holders plus a special insent she made herself* these should help its ward off all negetive auras around while u sleep its very strong hehe not even demons could haunt ur dreams its that strong now speaking of warding off oh Rui my darling bitch were are you*turns to see Rui running* oh my dear im hurt were just going to have some fun *snatches rui and chains her to a wall* fun for me that is *grabs her diamond coated steal whips then gives rui fifteen lashings then grabs a bucket of salt and tosses it on to her wounds making them more painful then grabs some barbed wire and ties it around her writs and forhead (sorta jesus crucifiing if u will hehe go figure its what she deserves ya know* then ties her to an egyptian Ankh* huh how does it feel getting hurt by the very weapon you used on galen bitch *then she grabs her daggers and tosses each on impaling her hands and feet to the ground and floor and then sends out huge waves of plauges each more painful then the last then invokes the powers of necromancy to torture her mind riddle her with the guilt of betraying the true son of ra just so she can be a slut and the guilt gets so strong she practically sreams with its pain then she rips out ruis beating heart out of her chest with her bare hands then sends massive lighting shocks through it till it burts but she still keeps ruia alive and fully consious of the pain shes going through then she leaves the room and presses a button to let killer bees scarabs and all sorts of insects have at her still shes nothing more then a mere memory* i was debating using acid on her but its been done unfourtunately hehe well gtg now KITG keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^

Is Yami ok? I'm glad that you back. Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne

Cool chapter! So Seto knew Joey before very interesting. The dancing I find exciting and how Galen was acting very funny. Where did that gun shot come from and where's Yami? update quick I need more!

THAT WAS SO NOT FAIR LEAVING US HANGING LIKE THAT!!!! HOW COULD YOU?? Please update soon. I need to know if Yami will be alright.

oh i love this story please emai me when updated and i was just wondering is thers going to be a lemon sence for jou and seto because if there is that woudl be so cool

What a cool vampire story I love it! Yugi gets that cool dragon pendant, does it have any powers? Is Joey going to become a vampire or what? update please I want to know what happens next.

Ohh very good please update soon