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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I like this story! It's very well written! Please do continue!
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Seto is sooooo adorable when he's jealous! Even if it's just a tiny bit.
I also liked Jou's "Christ! Who writes this stuff?"... *snickers*
I also liked Jou's "Christ! Who writes this stuff?"... *snickers*
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! omg, this story is soo good. i love the personalities (did i spell that right?) of all the characters that we've met so far. (i'm totally in love with your duke. the perve ^__^ ) for some reason, the waitress of the diner reminded me of the mom from Queer as Folk. (that woman is so fricking funny) anyway, i'm really liking the way that this was written. the characters seem a lot more realistic and down to earth. very different from what i usually read and i mean that in a good way of course. anyway, keep up the good work! looking forward your next update.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to go back and check the pairings that you had listed after this latest chapter. If I didn't know any better ... :D
Nice story. Definitly has some potential. So does Jou's father come home before, after or during Kaiba's ahh, cleaning up stage?
Nice story. Definitly has some potential. So does Jou's father come home before, after or during Kaiba's ahh, cleaning up stage?
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor, poor seto. though his dream was very amusing. ^_^
love the story, very nice ^_^
love the story, very nice ^_^
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
Liked the chapter lots even though, of course, there wasn't enough Seto...lol
No, seriously. I liked how you interpreted Otogi. Overdone, of course, but sooooooo funny and thus... reaaaaaaaally cool ^^
I alos liked Maxine which means something as I usually don't think all that highly about OCs.
I'm gonna add you to my livejournal friends if that's ok with you. ^^*
Liked the chapter lots even though, of course, there wasn't enough Seto...lol
No, seriously. I liked how you interpreted Otogi. Overdone, of course, but sooooooo funny and thus... reaaaaaaaally cool ^^
I alos liked Maxine which means something as I usually don't think all that highly about OCs.
I'm gonna add you to my livejournal friends if that's ok with you. ^^*
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit...I got horny just thinking of Kaiba like that! Hopefully Joseph will be very mean and dirty but I wish to read more of your 5-star story soon. And the Tristan/ Duke pairing, and how Duke acts... entertainment in it's highest form...
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the interaction between Joey and Duke. Well written!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's amazing how you bring the group together not only in matters of space but also in matters of humor and knowledge about each other.
I loved all of them in this chapter and you writing style is incredibly funny without being cheap. On the contrary, even though it is funny and makes me laugh about all the time it contains a lot of insight to the characters' relations and feelings.
I just loved it, and can't wait to read more!
I loved all of them in this chapter and you writing style is incredibly funny without being cheap. On the contrary, even though it is funny and makes me laugh about all the time it contains a lot of insight to the characters' relations and feelings.
I just loved it, and can't wait to read more!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good so far. I like it, post more soon!