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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods this was good. I can't wait for the sequel and i hope that comes out soon
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello again ^_^;;;
anyways, lovely story. that was very nice. :nods: um the chunks of writing made it a bit hard to read, but apart from tha i t was lovely.
heh, loved Jou and Seto though... and overprotective Yuugi. and jou's comment on the yamis and hikaris... it would be creepy no?
anyways, hope to see the sequel ^_^
anyways, lovely story. that was very nice. :nods: um the chunks of writing made it a bit hard to read, but apart from tha i t was lovely.
heh, loved Jou and Seto though... and overprotective Yuugi. and jou's comment on the yamis and hikaris... it would be creepy no?
anyways, hope to see the sequel ^_^
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! sequel! *dance dance*
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to update!!! This is great! I like how this is going. ^_^ Please please update~!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll have you know that you had me grinning insanely for a good portion of this story and you may have single-handedly brought my roommate to the conclusion that I have completely lost my mind. Good thing she's not going to be my roommate anymore in a few days. So anyway, be proud of yourself. :-D
So from the preliminary remark, I guess you could gather that I thought this was absolutely hilarious. Well, let me qualify that. It was hilarious a good portion of the time, and it was serious when it needed to be. Either way it was all very good. I adore your portrayal of Seto, and Joey's not too bad either. (Which I hope you realize could very well be up for an Understatement of the Year Nomination...) I enjoyed this fic a terrible amount that probably would be considered unhealthy in some circles, and I really can't wait for the next chapter. You've really done a wonderful job on this. If I had money, I would totally buy you something nice as a reward. ^-^ But since I'm a perpetually poor college student, I guess you'll just have to settle for my heartful praise. You rock!
So from the preliminary remark, I guess you could gather that I thought this was absolutely hilarious. Well, let me qualify that. It was hilarious a good portion of the time, and it was serious when it needed to be. Either way it was all very good. I adore your portrayal of Seto, and Joey's not too bad either. (Which I hope you realize could very well be up for an Understatement of the Year Nomination...) I enjoyed this fic a terrible amount that probably would be considered unhealthy in some circles, and I really can't wait for the next chapter. You've really done a wonderful job on this. If I had money, I would totally buy you something nice as a reward. ^-^ But since I'm a perpetually poor college student, I guess you'll just have to settle for my heartful praise. You rock!
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is awesomely good! I LOVE the humor. Can't wait for the sequel.
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good fic. I'm usually not into Seto/Jou fics, I tend to prefer Seto/Yami, but this one caught my attention. I wish I had seen it sooner. I enjoy the bickering between the two, and the entire scene with Honda, Duke, Jou and Kaiba. And of course, Bakura with a water gun ::cackles:: Now that was more than a little amusing.
Keep up the good work ^__^ I look forward to the last chaper, and the sequal. I will be reading both. ^^
TwilightHunter
Keep up the good work ^__^ I look forward to the last chaper, and the sequal. I will be reading both. ^^
TwilightHunter
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is so much fun to watch control-freak Seto slowly loosing it, especially when it's written with this much style. Every character in this story is great, but Seto is the best. Duke and Mokuba are priceless. What else can I say - I just love your writing!
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seto trying to explain himself by referring to his cellphone... oh my gosh... *laughs uncontrolledly*
And the whole scene in the park with Bakura and everybody was hillarious. Some authors put the characters together in one place and that's it. You actually let them interact and what they say and do totally fits.
What I liked too was the kiss between Otogi and Honda. Or rather what lead to the kiss and Seto's reaction to it. Basically I think it's 'cause Seto is totally ooc here (compared to what he's like usually) but you make it absolutely plausible by showing his emotions and thoughts and everything.
I also love your pop culture references! Kepp them! Add some more!
Plus, there's this ... Idon't know what... that fascinates me about all the scenes when Seto's body is reacting to Jou. Maybe it's that he loses control. I'm not sure... but something about those scenes makes me wanna scream at Seto "C'mon! You want him! Now go and get him!!!!!!"
And the whole scene in the park with Bakura and everybody was hillarious. Some authors put the characters together in one place and that's it. You actually let them interact and what they say and do totally fits.
What I liked too was the kiss between Otogi and Honda. Or rather what lead to the kiss and Seto's reaction to it. Basically I think it's 'cause Seto is totally ooc here (compared to what he's like usually) but you make it absolutely plausible by showing his emotions and thoughts and everything.
I also love your pop culture references! Kepp them! Add some more!
Plus, there's this ... Idon't know what... that fascinates me about all the scenes when Seto's body is reacting to Jou. Maybe it's that he loses control. I'm not sure... but something about those scenes makes me wanna scream at Seto "C'mon! You want him! Now go and get him!!!!!!"
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:sniggers: too amusing... heh, poor seto. and evil bakura... loved teas outburt by the way.
:thumbs up:
:thumbs up: