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person RaiL
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh another nice chapter! I can't wait to find out what Jou's gonna do to Seto! XD
person RaiL
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh that was insanely hilarious! It just gets funnier and funnier each chapter!!! XD
person Mara
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was funny!! I awnt that seqyuel NOW lol!! I laughed all the way through it was good.! Write more please! ja ne!
person nocturne
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, this is absolutely hysterical. ^.^ I loved it.

...and I am going to bed because it is 2:42 in the morning.

...why am I telling you this?
person Zombiedarkelf18
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yah cool story hope you post the sequel soon
person Ragna01
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! No! Don't let it be the end! It's too good! I enjoyed it a lot!
person Anon
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh cool story is seto just lusting after joey will it last or will be short lived
oh please write the sequel soon
person Hikari Raine
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the sequel hope it comes out soon
person nicky
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhm... I started reviewing here, so I'll give you the final review here as well (but I voted for you on the lair ^_~)

I think i don't have to mention how much I liked the sex scene... Nah... You can guess, hehe

But I need to tell you, how much I loved the phone scene, with everyone thinking Kaiba was... well... being Kaiba, lol , and with Kaiba nibbling Jou's neck and all... I loved it, there's nothing more to say. And I'm glad there's gonna be a sequel!!!!!
person Terry
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved this fic and I'll be looking for the sequel!