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person Anon
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Get your hand off my butt"
"Sorry. It does that."

Hahaha your Devlin is so much like the one from Abridged.
I hope I can find that sequel.
person Animom57
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I can't believe I didn't review this here!

Just wonderful. Your combination of humor and spice is delightful, and I've added you to my profile as a recommended person to read.
person Milly
schedule February 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You're in my personal top five of the ygo authors on this site.

The sex scene was HAWT. You know how to write!
person Milly
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! The mix of 'fluffy friendship friends who want to go on a picnic' with 'super-serious-topic and hints of abuse' with a successfully humourous style. I'll keep reading!
Milly
person Milly
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. I mean, that was the best and nicest and most unexpected (that would be the least expected, I guess) Kaiba introspection scene ever. Oh, and 'first one to make me vomit gets 50$' had me rotflmao.
You are a WIN of an author.
person Milly
schedule February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You can actually write humor. Like, everything you write is EFFORTLESSLY funny. I admire you enormously for that.
Milly
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GOD I loved this! :D
The whole Seto/Jou-thing was fantastic as well, but it was partly the interaction between the gang, especially Duke, Jou and Tristan that had me alughing so loud that people came in the room asking me what was so funny XD
But all the hysterically funny stuff aside (it was BRILLIANT!), the characters had a depth to them, which was very nice, and reading about Seto's revelation in the park twisted my heart a bit.
I'm gonna have this in my 'recommended reading' XD
PURE love ;P .
Thank you so so much for this!
person Mazu
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely love! pleas tell me bout sequal
person RaiL
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're really turning me into a pile of mush! The bit where Joey kissed Seto at the end was so sweet!
person RaiL
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a hilarious chapter! I love all the humour!