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for Yami's Mindless Gabble

by MaruSame

person Tal
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a waste of time.

If you’re going to continue writing these stupid little comments, I seriously hope you do a better job because this isn’t entertaining or amusing.
person Xena
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think MSTs are terrible and anyone that posts one without permission of the author should be kicked off this site.

Sure, some stories are so bad they are asking for it but it is still cruel.

If I see a bad story I just don't read it. Over the years my standards on fanfic has risen which means between badly written stories and my own personal preferences I don't read much fanfic any more.

I can't even try to read this story because although Yami/Yugi used to be one of my favorite pairings over time I grew to dislike it and at this point any Yugioh pairing that doesn't involve Bakura (except for Marik/Malik) bores me.

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Not true. When I was a kid I had orgasms. I was having them before I even knew what they were. If they meant a male ejaculating that shouldn't happen until puberty.

person Notorius
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Insteda of MSTing someone, how about writing your own? Let's see how good you are.
person Horizont
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What do you do if you find a fic you don't like? Right, you don't read it.You obviously found this fic "good" enough to read it completely and to even comment on it. To be honest I didn't like "Yami's diary" myself so I didn't read any further than the summary, but that's beside the point. After you read all this, why not do the author a favor and put all your thoughts into some useful feedback? That person might even consider what you write, but who would accept criticism in form of MST?
Speaking of which, it's not exactly funny. I've read worse but although the original story does have certain flaws I don't think any story deserves MST, it's just not fair since someone worked on it. You also don't know who the person behind the keyboard is. Not everyone here is a grown-up writer, there are many authors without much experience - if you have thoughts to share, use them to help the author improve his skills.

~Horizont