rate_review Reviews

Excellent points. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Good MST. Fuck the others who bitchin'. Do what the damn hell ya wanna!

No this story wasn't the best but this was cruel not funny some people in society are to dumb to know the difference, you apparently are one of them. The periods express thought. The 'afterlife' is in place of Heaven. I'm sure if they had used heaven that you would have got on them about that. And the part about this bondage toys. Its clear to me and to most others that it was simply a typo (yes the exist) this= his *gasp* sentence makes sense now. Normally I don't flame but I don't feel guilty flaming you. Your a poor person who wants to get joy out of hurting someone else because your not good enough. Granted the story wasn't the best but it didn't deserve this. Try writing something yourself before bashing other people next time. It seems you were in such a rush to belittle the story that you didn't get a good hold on what was going on.

This is fanfiction not reported documents. Go be an anal english teacher somewhere else.

Please get a grip! Its just a fanfic, not a soon-to-be-published story. Who cares if the spelling is off, or the right things arent used. The story is just for entertainment, and if you cant get that through your head, im sorry. Your just being rude.

Right now I'm practically curled up into the fetal position on my chair because I'm shaking so hard with laughter. That was mean...but true. I read "Yami Diary" before this- one thing though, you completely forgot to mention the fact that children can't exactly have orgasms. You have got to make fun of the other chapters- I can't wait to see how the handle the whole beastiality (spelling?) thing.

this is trash. this whole thing is just trash. who gave you the right to take soemone else's story and insult it this way. you make me sick. oh and just for a bit of insight the multiple periods is to show the person's words or thoughts trailing off. duh! why don't you go get a life. if you don't like something, don't read it and MOVE ON!

This needed to be done. Thank you.

As an addendum, the reviewer "Pissed Off Reader" is obviously an author sock-puppet. Just wanted to point that out.

hahhaa oh man, sad you so show childen post on this site. Love the mst!

kiafitz, I wonder if you've ever heard the phrase "anything worth doing is worth doing WELL." By not doing one's best, even in a fanfiction, it means that this isn't WORTH doing at ALL. Why should we lower our standards just because someone isn't getting paid for it? Does everything have to revolve around the all-mighty monetary unit of your personal location?

To the MSTer: I've seen funnier Msts, and I've seen less funny ones. It kind of reads a bit more like an editor's work than something actually to laugh at, but that's just my opinion.

People around here seem to have incredibly thin skins. Ohh, someone out there doesn't think your fanfiction is God's gift to writing. Signal to whine, stamp your feet, cry, and pout that you're not Mommy's unique snowflake anymore and the world is full of MEAN PEOPLE who don't think your precious feelings are something to be treated with kid gloves.

Welcome to the world. Sucks to be you.