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I love it, update soon!

Yamimi: I F***LOVE IT!
Yami Minature: Me too!
Duelist Kingdom Yami Action Figure: (Holding a single peice of Popcorn in his hands) Yeah nice!
Battle City Yami Action Figure: (Humping Yami Miniture) Huh?
Yamimi: I think I'll read the rest when they go back to their cupboard, Update soon! (Big Smile)

whew! I just love that story ^^ At first it caught my eye, because it seemed to be switched roles as yugi is the "bad" guy ;)
and now that I've read the 4th chapter I can't wait to read, how you'll get Yami "sane" again ^^
and which punishment his father will get... if any =/
AND I'm very curious about the "twins" *reminded her of Matrix reload and is now VERY curious*

Very nicely written Silver....It seems you have a good start to a good story....Hope to see your continued updates....tibpid Japanese baths are called Furos and they are sooooo nice to lay in....catti-dono

RD: heh hes right Yami u cant do worse and or better then wings or fangs or anything of the supernatural that is why we call them as such there not by any means normal and another thing yami theres nothing wrong with your eyes NOT A SINGLE THING and anyone who says so are fools id give an arm and a leg to have your kind of eyes yami no one has eyes that are the same and if ur father says its freakish then hes too stupid to know DIFFERNCES when he sees it were all different no one can change that and if that moron of a father of yours cant see that then its his own dam fault not yours huh well Silvershadowfire update soon and keep up the great work huh poor yami i feel so sry for him and not cuz i pity him but because hes been reduced to a shadow of his former self he has enough power in him to completly overwelm that bastard huh but because of how badly he treats yami its shrunk to a mere spark well its time to turn it back into the towering Malestrome its meant to be well keep ^ the great work and ^date soon gtg now JA NE ^__^

woot! the plot thickens and more characters are introduced. poor yami, i feel so sorry for him. but hopefully yugi can reverse all the damage that cruel man inflicted upon him with time and help yami to gain some confidence and self worth. not to mention, to give yami some of the best sexual experiences of his life. and i say experiences because i want yugi to take him multiple times. *snikers* keep up the good work! looking foward to the next update.

Oh! Great chapter! And the plot thickens...should be interesting when Malik and Marik come into play;) I like how Yugi is looking out for our poor friend Yami:( Poor guy, his father needs to be taught a lesson *evil grin* Great work!

more! and lemons, those are good too..

Oh WOW!!!! Update soon please! I loved this chapter!!! Sounds like Yugi is falling into a small trap of his own, huh?

*coos*
I like it ,yes I do!
sorry Im hyper in any case I like
I hope to see a new chapter soon ^.^