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for Happy Hallow's Eve

by Whytney

person Naria
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! MALIK'S A PERVY NARCISSISTIC VOYEUR!!! ^_^ But I'd have to agree with him...that was hot! *whew!* I'm burnin' up!! 'Scuse me... *runs away to molest boyfriend*

Ah! Much better!! ^_^ Oh yes, I am in love with this story! I can't wait for the next update! Just so you know, I check everyday and hope for the best! My boyfriend usually winds up cleaning the drool off of the desk since I get so excited with each update!!! I'M SPECIAL!! And so are you, so keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S. Can I have the t-shirt? I'll take real good care of it!! ^_^ It'll have a god home on my Bishie Shrine!!
person Naria
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*reading Ryoko's review*

*homicidal rage buliding*

*stabs Ryoko in the head* SHUT UP, YOU MORON!!!!!!!

*goes to town tearing stupid idiotic shitface to teeny tiny bits with a SPORK*

*Licks spork*

Mmmm...Tastes like justice! ^_^
person Rachel Dracon
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy FUCK, that was unbelievable hot. Damn good lemon, and interesting chapter over all. It's nice to see someone actually looking into Anzu's character for once, and I wonder what's up with the weird shadow that's been hanging around. Oh well, all will be revealed sometime, eh? Update again soon!
person Camille
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute story! I can't wait to read the rest.
person Naria
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would've kicked Marik in the ass!! ^_^ With a 50% chance of molestation or "rape", I'd DEFINITELY take the chance!!! ^____^ I'm a perve...Well, and I think there would've been some Yami action goin' on in the leaves had there not been impending death by axe, right? So MAYBE there SHOULD be some action later on, eh? EH?! *WINK*WINK*NUDGE*NUDGE* Mmmmm....Bakuraaaaaa.....Yeah, I'm obessesed with Bakura and his sexiness, ever since I took a personality quiz that said I would be him! I GET TO LICK PEGGIE'S EYE!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA!!! O.o...Yeah...

Anyhoo, good story, good plot, good characters, good EVERYTHING!!! MORE SQUEEEEE FOR YOU!! WOOT!!

But, with this note, you should POST!!! so I can praise you more and more until your head explodes and I can point and laugh...but not really...sorry, that was the sadist in me!! UPDATE!!!!
person Naria
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOWZA!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! I love how you made the characters so...REAL!! They act like real people, instead of scary, strange, overly dramatic, duleing feinds!! I LOVE IT!!! ^___^ I 'specially loved it when Marik called Bakura a "sad fuck"....yeah, definitey my fave!! I say you update, and I'll review and beg for more and more!! You're very talented adn I look forward to more!!!!

No, really..More...NOW!!!!
person Rachel Dracon
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, things are getting interesting... The Ryou/Bakura moment was nice, as was the Marik/Malik time. And I'm glad Malik apologized, he way overreacted, though I've been told by friends that brother often do that (some actually to that extent). In the summary you said, 'cost them their lives,' is there going to be any character death? Unless telling me would spoil something, or I'm jsut being stupid by thinking there might now be. Anyway, was great, update again soon!
person hallow tears
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^__^ omg, hey that was good, i hope u do continue XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD kks? quicks quick
person Rachel Dracon
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huh. Interesting. I like how you got to the confession in the first chapter, that's unusual, but nice. I kinda get the vibe it might be a Marik/Malik/Bakura/Ryou fic, but I dunno, maybe I'm just weird. Anyway, I enjoyed the firs chapter, write more soon!

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