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for Happy Hallow's Eve

by Whytney

schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com
person Kugatsu
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wanna know what's gonna happen! stop with the suspense!
person Naria
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooo....So MYSTERIOUS! I LOVE IT!!

And woot to us and our insane zaniness!! YAY!! Alright, if you think I'm crazy now, you oughtta see some of my reviews for my Fruits Basket ficcy! ^_^ I'm SO proud!! I was called sadistic and freaky! Maybe cuz it's true...deep down...in Yamiland... ^_^ YAY!!

Let's be sadistic freaky perves, TOGETHER!! *does happy dance*

Oh, yeah...Write more, and I say the boys should beat up those sissified punching bags named Yuugi...those pansies need to get bitchslapped!

yay sex! That should be my warcry!! And hey, we're obviously all nerds/geeks here if we're rabid fangirls/boys/voyuers/sadists! Good times, I say!
person Rachel Dracon
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, a good chapter indeed! I like the way you described the inside of the ruins (they were ruins, right?), very, very creepy, freaked me out. And dude, that park ranger seems sketchy to me too... Probably just me being paranoid though. Anyway, update again soon! Is there going to be a Ryou/Bakura lemon in the near future?
person Ryoko
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um... Malik doesn't like meat. He is not vegan/vegetarian, he just like red meat! He'll eat fish and chicken, but not beef.

And Malik doesn't seem like the type to like rap... really... the way he dresses and acts shows you that much. Maybe music from his own country!
person Naria
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sheepish grin* Sorry...but I DO have semi-homicidal tendencies towards stupid people who have no clue what they're talking about. It's like, they're ASKING to get bitch slapped or sporked to death! *Marik-esque twitchy eye* Or BOTH!! *GLEE!*
But that's beside the point! If you don't want me to kill your enemies, then I shan't! But that doesn't mean I can't THINK about pain and death and torture and horror and terror and BUNNIES! RABID BUNNIES!!

o.O

^o^ Huzzah for twins! ^o^ If we were siamese, I'd know when you update! YAY!!

Good chappies, and I LOVE the fact that you're making Jou jealous!! HEHEEHEE!! Truth is, I like Kaiba and Jou pairings, but Honda and Jou always made more sense in my sick little head...Same thing with Anzu and Shizuka! I dunno...Maybe I'm just a little too crazy...CUTE YURI FEST!! ^_^ And I crave more! Any smut you write, I look forward to!

And I know this is going to sound bad, but the dead squirrell was DAMN FUNNY!! XD It vaguely reminded me of something I read before, but not quite, as this story isn't about Survivor or Escaflowne...But I can see Marik as being responsible for that! THAT CRAZY FUCK! But he's damn sexy!! ^_^ And a pervert...he should molest Bakura...and Bakura should like it...and it will be good. And the hikaris should watch, since they're really closet voyeurs...Yeah.

*does happy dance*

Doo bee doo bee doooooooooo!! I *heart* you!!!
person Lori
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Look, Ryoko...you're obsessed. Seriously. If you want Malik to be 100%, totally, in every way, shape and form in character, WATCH THE FUCKING ANIME! This is FICTION! Sheesh! And do NOT bother replying to this, no one cares, ok? She is NOT going to change the fic just because you don't like it, so don't waste our precious time. Shush, you annoying, bitchy little fly buzzing in the authoress's ear. Feh.
person Naria
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah! I have been dubbed a rabid fan-girl!! ^_^

I say woot for me, and I feel sorry for you, Ryoko! You obviously don't understand the concept of artistic license and creativity! Fanficdom is a place for people to read and write their greatest fantasies regarding their favorite stories and characters. It's not supposed to cater to the reader's every whim, it's supposed to reveal the writer's ability to share their ideas, which in this case, Phantom_Panther has done a wonderful job! And because the characters of this story are not exactly like they are in the series, it gives us a chance to see how else they can be interpreted. As long as the writing flows beautifully, it makes for a good story. This story overflows with good dialogue, an intriguing plot, and amusing characters who seem real to life in our world and time. If nothing else, the characters in the actual series are unbelieveable! Not that I'm saying they're not f*@#ing awesome, they're just too dramatic and showy...they're not like real people! Phantom_Panther has made them real people, with real personalities!

And honestly, you have to admit Marik calling Bakura a sad fuck is amusing!

Keep your mind open, buddy, and just wait till someone flames you and see how you feel. Remember, not everyone thinks the same way you do.
person Ryoko
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Person who stabbed me... wow... You are an idiot! Excuse me the plot is so incredibly fast for what I am used too!

Why must the rabid, foaming at mouth fangrrls be allowed to review?
person Lori
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Ryoko....How could you? *sniffle* How dare you bash my sweets! (authoress) *sniff sniff, cry cry* Well, i'm not gonna get on your ass or any thing, I can't get mad at you for flaming and then flame too, so...I just personally think that the characters SHOULD be OOC in this type of fic. I mean, if Yami went ooon and ooon and oon about the heart of the cards while he's pounding Yugi into the mattress, it would just kill the fic, neh? and if Marik did that freaky stretchy thingy just when he leans in to kiss Malik...*shudders*. Well, the point is, my dear friend has worked hard on this fic and it's turned out quite nicely, so no need to bash it. It's one thing to flame when some one writes some retarded Mary Sue fic and hooks up just about every character with an OC, or writes just to bash yaoi, but if you simply don't like the way she's made the characters, please, Pleas just stop reading.