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by Ykarzel

person smalvina
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was very nice
person astracindel
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the series. You described the beginning of my relationship with my hubby...We knew each other, had sex, then built a relationship....lol...we've been together for three years now though, and have an 18mo old son :)....so it works like that too....lol.

Anyway great stuff and I'm glad I found your works again...its been a while since I've read anything of yours (I haven't been on much since the beebee.)
person Iyasu
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Submitting is good. Hell, who WOULDN'T submit to Jou, that sexy god? ^^ Great work.
person Katsu
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story :) Thanks for writing it...

...I wonder what it'd be like to do a relationship the other way around - to not have sex until you're in love, I mean...

*shakes herself*

Stop making me think, dammit? *grins*
person Jessica
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAHHH!...I can't believe Seto can't say those three little words when we know he's completely smitten with Jou! I just wanted to let you know that this is one of my favorite all-time YGO fics! I love how Jou was the dom and Seto was the nervous uke! It makes him all the more endearing! And it's one of the few Jou/Seto ones that is well-written! I just love this series so much that I had to comment on it! This is actually like my third time reading it! I just love reading your work; your style varies and is, therefore, always new and refreshing. I hope your muse never deserts you! Ja! ^_^
person Tory
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous, wonderful, very good, loverly story. All of them. (well, the trilogy, at least)


Seme Jou? This fan-girl's dream come true. Brilliantly done, with a wonderful voice. I loved it and hope there's more like it out there somewhere.

(by the way, I was directed to these stories by CJ, also of "whosjeebus" fame...I blame her a smidgen for the furtherance of my corrupt, boi-smut ways. ^_^)
person nicky
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this part was better than the other two. I like this one the best. yep.
why? Cause of... so many things...
like, how Jou talks to Des... so cute and so close and... kinda like she's his mom but also like she's not... can't explain it.
And also I liked how Seto didn't know what to say in Jou's room and then just didn't say anything, cause sometimes that's just the best thing to do.
Also I liked the ending and the thing about Seto's voice, hehe...
AND: I'm so glad you didn't make Seto say "I love you" out loud... it would have been soooooo the wrong at that moment... cause it would have been forced and all... and it's just sooooooo cliché, Jou was right about that, lol...

So yeah... overall opinion... Woooooooooooooohooooooooooooooooooooo ^^*
person koalared2000
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Loved this trilogy, but it really should have a sequel or at least an epilogue of Seto finally saying those 3 little words!
Loved your comment on coffee and beaches. I personally have a charm depicting BOTH subjects on my charm bracelet, subjects dear to my heart.
person ToonMistress (Too lazy to log in)
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*huggles* Always go against the grain when it comes to Jou and Seto! I want more! *huggles even more* I was listening to Megadeth while reading and it just fits with Jou! You must add more!
person Maggiemay
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I couldn't wait for it at the Lair. *Tackle Glomp* Outstanding, stupendous, wonderful...if that is too effluent...Just plain damn great.

Maggiemay