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by KrisDiscman

person Yamima
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yamimi: I can't immagine Yami with Honda because Honda is a flatchulant, sexist, ugly ass pig!

I can't immagine him with Seto either, Seto's a DICK! Just Mim's opinoin, You have a great

start author....authors

Yami Minature: She's so one sided on who get's to love Yami

Battle City Yami Action Figure: It's a good begining

Duelist Kingdom Yami Action Figure: Mim, stop gagging!

Yamimi: I'm sorry but I thought of Seto naked EW! Yami too but he's a sex god

Yami Minature: Stop Being rude Yamimi, I think you ar doing a good job too, BC Said so, and so does DK, but Mim's a little hard to turn

Yamimi: I SAID IT WAS GOOD GUYS! DAMN TOYS STOP TALKING! Sorry guys, please update soon, I shall be reading I love Yami so much

I must read to see what he does! See you soon! (Smiling)
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Er...a cock ring is supposed to hurt...meh. Maybe Kaiba has a masochistic streak. You have GOT to continue this, there aren't nearly enough prideshipping fics out there. And I loved the line "My ass is a virgin, but my mouth isn't." Maybe Yami and Kaiba could take turns topping one another when they get to Seto's mansion. *naughty hentai smirk* And Yami broke his promise, he said he was going to keep Kaiba chained to his bed all day. Damn, I was really looking forward to that scenario too...THE NEXT CHAPTER HAD BETTER BE GOOD! ^_^ I'm sure it will be, cuz here comes Honda with the drama! Update soon!!!

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