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for The Incident

by xdisassembledx

person Pengwinn
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I've had this story on my favorites list for like, ever now. And I really REALLY want you to update!!! XD

I understand about the busy thing. I'm a writer and I get too busy, sometimes, too. I have like, seven fanfics that I just need to finish off. -_-; I have an account on fanfiction.net....ShukketsuYume. I wrote this fic called the YGO Musical. It's a barrell of laughs. ^^; At least, my reviewers tell me, anyway. You might like it. [no, that wasn't shameless advertising, that was an attempt at suggesting reading.]


I really, really like your fic though, and I like how you write. If you could write more soon, I'd be really, really happy.


Forever your faithful reviewer,


~Pengwinn~
person kaibasbabe
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what happen to jou? is seto going to help? come on dont leave me in suspense please (sad puppy eyes) :(
person yamiyugiforever
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Hope you update soon till next time.
person Dark Mistress
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you can update before then cause I really want to read more. I think it's very interesting on how this fic is going. Can't wait for the next chapter
person J.S.
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its not parental abuse o.O
well this should b interesting....i cant wait 2 read more
hope u find time 2 update
person Raphael
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Please continue! It was so sweet. And you weren't all quick and choppy like so many others. ^^ Need.... JouXkaiba fics.... running out. Please? For me? xD
person Yukiko
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder too what could have scared him like htat ...
person Black-Butterfly
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're way too hard on your self, this is good! ^_^ and to answer your question, it's most commonly "Jounouchi." please continue, i'm enjoying this! :D
person J.S.
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like da story line even though dis type of story (where seto helps joey from an abusive parent) is common, it never gets old ;)
i hope to read da next chapter and i personally dont care if u misspell words, as long as the meaning gets through
update soon please
person yami nefertira
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww that was so cute with kaiba and jou, so sweet, cute and touching, it was really sweet what kaiba is doing for jou, please update soon and keep going, this is good . ^_^