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for Of the Sun and Moon

by BakkyBoy

schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was simply beautiful; it truly was.
person jin1377
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is the cutest story i ever read!!!! so kawaii!!!!!!love it!
person Tink
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PU-LEEZE UPDATE! I'M LITRALLY BEGGING YOU!
I love this so much. Don't abandon it!
person Sarah
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh please write more! I noticed it's been a while since you update but PLEASE i beg you don't abandon this fic. I really love it.
I love the continuing changing Pov's and the emotion you get across with your words is amazing.
And the lemon.. holy hell! *drool bucket*
PURLEEZE continue. I'm dying to find out what happens next. He will have to take Ryou with him ^_^
Okay.. heres the deal, you have to wrap up the story for us okay?! Even if it's only one chapter more, even if you don't write anything about their furture or whatever you had planned just finish it please! Don't leave a wonderful fic abandoned just because you haven't got a million reviews! Please! Those of us who have been bothered to review love it so write more! I WILL continue to bug you about this!
I'll be checking for updates! ^_^
Ja ne!
-Sarah
person Tink
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I really like this. The lemon was.. amazing but.. b-but whats going to happen next. How will Ryou cope with Malik.. well gone.
I wanna know! You have to write more. Maybe he will stay? Oh oh! I know, Ryou can go with him! Yeah.. that works.
You have to update soon.. and make sure to include more of those smexy lemons *drool*
person KittyBlue
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!! I love this fic!!
Malik & Ryou are soooo cuteeeeeeeee!!!!!
And I wanted to know if this is the end... Can't be right???
Please update soon!!!
I want to read more!!
Kiss
KittyBlue