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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happen next? Me like the story. Please keep writing. Ja ne
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this. It's fresh and different. I can't wait to read more, although you need to stop writing choppy sentences in the dialogue. It takes away from the story.
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh good, you did do it. was to go yugi. this is a nice change from Yugi being helpless all the time. please update soon.