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for Deviation Capacity I

by BakkyBoy

schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shudder* I fear to review; you won't send that sick Baku after me ???

The story was excellent, but I was eating at the time and the flesh of lunch meat just didn't chew well with the gore.

still shuddering*

Will there be more because nothing was resolved with Yugi and Ry??
person jin1377
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now don't ask why but i'm laughing like i heard the best joke ever. am i really so much a sadist? it is very good...is there gonna be a next chapter? if so please update soon!!!!! i love this!!!! i like bakura in this one!!! he's so not ooc!!!!! i love this!! please upsate soon? please? please? please?
person Blaine
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Remember me? Never mind 'brat', she was mean. WRIGHT THE NEXT DAMN CHAPTER!!! Ask and you shall reseve? PLEASSSSSSSSSS!!! I would be greatful, it's been to long, remember my glowing reviws... Thank You.
person Yami no Callisto
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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I'm begging you....please, more chapters!!! xD
person Liss
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a mean yet enticing fic ^^ I really like it...and I hope you continue. It's nice and different, since we're only talking about two sets of Yami's. It's also nice to see the "beginning" of the relationship and Ryou not being so submissive. :D
person the god of death
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story!!!
i love this couple!!
you are great !
i would love to read more of your works!!!
person rachel
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pplllleeeeaaaaaasssssseeeee!!! you can't stop now that would be cruel!!!
person zaji
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You need to continue this -- it's quite a good read. Just shorten the lines of tildes. ;)
person Zafiro carrillo
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love this fic i hope you up-dated soon

PS: more more more more more more
person squid
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
seriously, this is extremely well written. The characters aren't ooc, which is something very difficult to acomplish, the descriptions are very detailed, the chapters are long, your grammar is good... maybe I'm exagerating, but I think it's flawless. Plus, Ryou/Yugi is one of my favourite YGO couples (I hope eventually they'll get together, or at least have sex once... yeah, I'm a horny bastard). It has all the elements to be one of my favourite stories, and it sure is in my top five.

I hope you continue with the good work, and thanks for writing a good quality story, which are very few and very needed.

Squid