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for Dark Roads

by DracOnyx

person leighc
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You shoulda decked your ex dearie.....Sorry....not our business just a sore spot you could say. Excellent chapterness *gives two thumbs up and chuckles as shy does the same (shyly of course^_~)* That line...bout Yami worrying if there was something wrong with him......never thought we'd see it coming from him. Dang sad girl...dang sad.

Shyness highness says hello shyly (oooh...tongue twister ha ha!) You keep your chin up!!!!

*tight glompage*
person kit-kit
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great chapter and i can't believe how your ex would do something like that i would have deck him to if some ex of mine did that to me. can you have bakura find out about what seto did to yami and have him beat the mess out of him.
person Ralphiere
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter!! OMG, Seto is such a raging prick, and yeah it sounds quite typical! I love where this story's going, and I'm waiting for more!

Su
person Angel Kawaii
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah. You should've socked him good. That is just sad. Hopefully Atemu gets better. Please update soon. Ja!!
person Niffty24
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn it! That was great! I can't wait to see what happens next!
person leighc and shy
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.....my.....GOD! Dang girl but you're just too good. Frack! *applauds* This was a great way to end the night! *grabs the shyness to plunk her down at the comp before walking away, muttering under her breath*

*shyly watches her go before turning to leave her own shy review* Ever so very shy hi's. *blushes a thousand shades of crimson* That....was...it....*shyly whispers* wow. *shyly hides behind the returned leighc*

Yeah, she was near tears in some places I think *cackles at the shocked, shy gasp* Keep it up Drac, you're doing great!

*huggles to absolutely everyone because I just feel like it!!!*
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. That was incredible, intense, and very very HOT! *waves hand to cool sweat* I LOVED IT!! God, that was an lemon and a half! *changes drool sponge*

Seriously, your stalker is very impressed. Now, if you'll escuse me, I think I'll go jump my hubby.

Update soon!

Silvershadowfire (and Yami SSF, who is too busy drooling right now to write.)
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know..this story keeps getting better the more times I read it!! ^^..Yummy lemon..mmmmmmm...blood..sharp, shiny, pointy, pretty things....*dreamy look*...
person Rubicant
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the knife fight...I'm interested in how you got that coreographed...because it seems..realistic.

Very interesting so far.
person Chaos Dragon
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pulls out bucket and sets under chin and drools* damn that was hot! *bows and kiss yur feet* you are my idol!!!

Dragon