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Oh, wow. The lemon in this was hot, but almost more interesting for what it showed - even the first time between Yami and Bakura was more intimate, really, than the sex between Bakura and Marik. Will be interesting to see how this pans out.

Thanks for the chapter!

OhMYFINGGOD! Sweet hell on honey bisquits. *feels a slight tug on her sleeve*

Pretty shyly please leighc......language.

Oops. Sorry kiddo but what do you expect when I've been cooped up all day. *tousles shy's hair* Anywho......yayness for updateness. Keep up the good work because oh boy is this wonderful. Heartwrenching and full of angst but still wonderful. *plops shy down in front of the comp* Your turn and no chibi looks. Ryou's is bad enough!

*blushes a thousand shades of crimson* Um....shy and quiet yays for updateness. *shyly huggles the update* I...I feel so shyly sorry for everyone. Pretty shyly please more soon.

*pushes shy away before she can use the shy chibi look of pleading doom* You owe me for that one^_~ Keep it up girlie. *huggle pile!*

Hey great story!
It may just be me being crazy, but i;ve noticed that your story has been moving away from a darker angsty drama to something a bit....fluffier? Maybe this is where you were wanting to go, and hey it could even work out with furture chapters...but there was alot of emotional stuff in this chapter. well enough of my ramblings...im looking forward to your next chapter!

*huggles Ryou* Okay ^^

Great chapter!! Of course you already knew that..^.~ Now with the changes I can't wait to see where this goes!!

Kaiba is one fucking bastard and Yami needs to get over his pride and talk to Bakura! God, why do people always take the harder road in life?
So happy you updated, it made my day ^_^ Just keep them chapters coming!

Poor Atemu, he's such a mess but gods help me i like him like that lol. Great chapter, great lemon, keep'em coming~
Dragon

great chapter as always i wonder if yami is every going to tell bakura about seto or will bakura have to beat it out of him.

You're only getting better and better. I can't wait for more! *grins*

Yami SSF: O.o Whoa.

SSF: Thank you for that stunning report, yami. *turns to DracOnyx* That, tomodachi, was one of the best things you have ever written, period. I couldn't breathe. I was honestly expecting Yami to kill him. To put it succintly...

Holy Fucking Shit. That...was awsome. Yami just ...snapping like that. This is going to be a very interesting conversation with Yugi, let me tell you. And I can totally see Atem's reaction when he realizes that it's Bakura.

The turnaround point is going to be when Atem finally takes Bakura, isn't it? I don't think that most people realize how powerful the act of sexual intercourse can be. But I'm rambling.

IM me sometime - we can talk. Oh, and here's a jackhammer to help Bakura and you with the writer's block ;)

Ja ne!
Your stalker, Silvershadowfire

Woah! I can't believe it. Okay yes i can. But I love that pairing! Lol I'm glad you're okay. Please update soon! Ja ne.