rate_review Reviews

Great chapter..as always...but hmm..I think I remember already saying that about this chapter..^.~...

wonderful job beautiful! *huggles*

*Giggles* Of course you're worth it dear - it was a lot of your writing that actually got me into fanfiction, so hush.

I think my brain died from so much sheer cuteness - the Bakura and Atemu reconciliation was very touching, but what got me the most was Ryou and Bakura at the end. *Sigh* So...poignant. Just remember I'll be stalking you until the next chapter! *Snicker*

I've just realized that I read the last chapter a bit ago and never reviewed! I'm so flighty like that (of course usually it's because I get distracted by the beasties), and for that I apologize!

Anyway, I digress! The last two chapters were both amazing! I loved how you did the scene with Marik, it was great insight into their relationship, and a wonderful contrast to what is brewing between Bakura and Atemu (and of course the whole lemon thing was incredibly hot!). I think that sometimes fluff is a good thing, and you delved into the potentially tender side of Bakura, and frankly no matter how big a hard ass someone is they have a bit of a soft side there somewhere!

Great plot development, great scenes!! YAY!

Su

It's me! As I said, lovely chapter - I loved the emotions before, during and after that kiss. It was just so wonderful and so real. I loved it, and I'm looking forward to how this changes their relationship.

First off, you are more than welcome. Our friendship means a lot and I'm glad to be there when you need help. And now..the story...GREAT!!! As always! More please!!!!

hehe, i dont mind fluffiness THAT much, and besides your plot and writing are both exellent!

I wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying the way you are setting the relationships within this story. The underlying warmth and compassion being placed into Bakura is well written. It flows naturally, without the "awww" factor that could have easily snuck in.

aaawww the chapter was sweet i liked the kiss and the inner turmoil.

*grins* I still have a lot of work to do and learn but thanks for the compliment! And your still my idol!

OOh so they are beginning to realize they have feelings for each other! YAY! Such a sexy couple, if i thought i could write Bakura i would do more darkshipping than prideshipping but in the mean time i'll just read your amazing fics.

Can't wait for more!

Dragon

This story just keeps getting better and better. I love your descriptions, your bold statements, your exploration of what others consider taboo, the whole package. I can't wait to read more and I hope you find the time to update very soon.