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by DracOnyx

person Chaos Dragon
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals and runs around like a rapid fangirl* You're back! YAY! and hell yes I'll join in and help hunt him down and kick his ass! Just point me in the right direction.

anyhoo... excellent chappie! I'm glad Atemu finally told Seto off lol course if it was me i would have hit him and hard. Knock the son of a bitch out (hope my fellow prideshipping fans don't see this lol they'd kill me)

now time for Bakura and Atemu to meet back up.. ooh can't wait for that!

Dragon
person aspiker
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!

I enjoyed this chapter. You captured and expressed the mixed emotions and confusion of both Bakura and Atemu quite well. 8-) It came as a surprise that Dartz was the one who initially broke Bakura's heart, causing him to build a wall around said heart.

The character of Seto got his long overdue dressing down by Atemu. My hope is that it at least clears out some of the confusion in Atemu's mind about his feelings for Bakura. Who knows, maybe it could be a stepping stone on the way to Bakura.

person Nancy
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im sorry to hear about your husband, he sounds like a total ass. Good thing we live in times where divorce is legel huh? And I love your story by the way.
person Futile Faith
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fuck that shit, I don't even know the bastard and I wanna kill him...slowly...with a spoon.
Anyway, forgetting about all that unplesantness...I'm so glad you updated, it really made me happy. It's unbelievable that even though RL is a bitch at the moment you stil update. Thank you.
Things will get better no matter how bad things seem at the moment and even if the bastard doesn't appreciate you, the rest of us - all you loyal fans and reviewers - love you dearly.
person Kugatsu
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw! *sniffles* Poor atemu! *stabs seto doll repeatedly*
person Lady Laran
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad you updated, and hell yes! I'll join you in hunting down the jerk!! Great update, as usual, and I hope you guys keep recovering from the computer crash! *huggles to all*

Laran and the crew
person MarikIshtar77
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool, I'm the 100th review.
Sure, I'll help ya hunt the shit-stain down. I'm always up for a good killing. Especially when it's a guy who's a lying sack of shit who doesn't know the difference between his head and his ass.
Excellent chapter, by the way. Lots of emotion, great job!
I'll leave you with a funny now. As I was reading tonight, a big fat muthafucking June Bug decided to fly in my hair. He was making funny noises and squirming around like he was going to die. Well, he was right. I batted the stupid thing out of my hair...and one of my evil cats pounced his ass and proceeded to eat him.

person Switch
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like to kill people. just say the word I'll be there
person kit-kit
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter and i can't believe that your ex would say that your not attractive. if you need some helpp hurting him down to kill him know that im up for the ride.
person Angel Kawaii
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had no idea. I knew that her life was being messed up but I didn't know it was this fucked up. I send her best wishes and hope she will get better. This is a very good way to get her frustration out and hopefully the gods will do her good. Very great chapter and I hope you update soon. Ja ne.