rate_review Reviews

i love this chapter it something different but not in a bad way. i don't know why but the story just screms sex and shit.

Oh man this is going to be another awesome story with lots of kinky sex... lol
I can't wait to see how this goes!

Dragon

*claps quietly in shy delight* Ever so very shy and quiet yay. Oh I shyly love it so far and I shyly know it's going to just be t-riff. *whispers shyly* I knew Yami had guts and could be rough and tumble. *gives a shy curtsey before toddling off so that leighc can have the compy for the night*

*waves* Girl once again you have outdone yourself *claps* bravo! This fic is going to be as great as all your others. You do such a great job at a.u. or whatever it is it's called. Keep up the good work and take care.

*huggles from us both*

This has incredible potential! I loved the start so far - please keep this going!

Su

^^

This is really good though it reminds me of a story I read before. Anyway I can't wait to see what happens next!

It's a good start...not bad. I see that Atemu is a sadomasochist in this, eh? Surprising but okay. If Bakura was one, I wouldn't be too shock...ha, ha, he's capable of a lot of things, ha. Anywho, hurry it up with the next chapter. Bye.

Bet I'm the first to review!! XD

Loved it every time I've read it....only one thing...

I NEED MORE!!!! *glomps* Love ya soul sis!

Man..that was just as good, if not better, than the first draft you sent me. I can't wait for the rest of it! Update soon or the wombats will start flying. ;-)