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for Dark Roads

by DracOnyx

person Lady Laran
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I like the glimpse from Yugi's POV about his brother, the fact that the grief over Seto seemed to have been filled last year. The only thing that worries me is how Yugi will take the news that his brother WILLINGLY joined a gang...and knowing how motor mouthed (no offense to the character lovers out there) Jou can be..three bets he'll slip up and Yugi will pick up on it. Just an idea..lol. Given how sensitive Yugi is, I don't think he's going to take it well at all.

UPDATE SOON OR WOMBATS WILL FLY!!!!

*giggle* And btw..I'm happy for the friendship we have and will be there for ya. You know that! *huggles*
person zehlyah
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another amazing start to what I know will be another amazing story.
I love your ability to tweak the character's lives but still keep their personalities intact.
Can't wait for the next update.
person kit-kit
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hell yeah that chapter was great i bet you marik is going to try and get rid of yami.
person leighc and shy
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps and whistles as shy peeks out from behind her to give a timid thumb's up* Oh Drac this just keeps getting better and better! Very well done. This fic is so gonna rock, but then we knew it would^_~ *pushes shy to the forefront with the 'do as you're told look plastered across her face* Speak girl! (and yeah Drac, shy is the cutest dang thing I've ever had the pleasure of call'n a best friend)

*blushes a thousand shades of crimson while giving a shake of her head in denial* Um....ever so shy hi's. Shy and quiet yay for updateness *shyly huggles the update* I shyly knew I'd love this fic. Pretty shyly please keep up the good work. I'm ever so shyly jealous *blushes purple* Oh but pretty shyly please...well I mean..if...if at anytime this proves to be...not theraputic anymore.....leighc and I would understand. *gives a shy curtsey before ducking behind leighc to hide again*

Yeah woman, you be sure to take care of yourself and those kids of yours. *big hugs from us both with a side of praying*
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! But you already knew I felt that way! ^_~..*huggles* Always here for you, you know that! mmmm grapes...Oh! Can't wait for another update! ^^
person xSakurax
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...O.o go Yami go...
person aspiker
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a damn fine beginning! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter...
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blink* Well, that's different. This should prove interesting...I'm a little disappointed at the lack of magic...but then Roses had no magic either, and that certainly didn't disappoint.

Keep going please!
person Silver thorns
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read dark fics but this looks....interesting *snicker* hell I'm just here for the lemons. But great stuff, keep up the good work!^_^
person Angel Kawaii
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Please update soon. I really like Yami/Bakura pairings and this is just what I was looking for. Ja ne!