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for Dark Roads

by DracOnyx

schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. And if your husband said that to you, he's a dick, unworthy of you and your time. Please keep writing.
person sugarmoe
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I totally love this fic! I first read it early last year, I thought I'd already reviewed, but after checking... turns out I haven't. Anyway, ever since I read it, I've been waiting for you to update and am desperate to find out what happens in the next chapter! Please, update soon! It's a totally awesome story and they way you write is... well, fantastic! (I obviously don't have a way of words like you do...) You've written the characters so well... I can actually see all of this happening in the show... well, if they weren't born in the ancient times and able to wield magic...

Well, gotta go! Bye!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O!! I WILL PICK ME PICK ME!! I'm great with two twin daggers at 12 inches each *laughs sadistically* Care to play?
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
in another note...fantasticstic story...can you continue it please...unless your dead...are you?
person Danni
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*grabs the shotgun*
What's his social security number?
General vacinity last sighted?
...?

No, in all serious, I love the story thus far. I'm sorry that you--well, I'm assuming that this was based from true events. I'm sorry you might have had to endure some of the things mentioned here. I enjoy that you took these mystical and magical characters and turned them into ordinary people, though. It puts a new perspective on things that others haven't stumbled accross.

Like, some of the reactions and such in here, I actually find myself saying, "yea, okay, thats what I would have said," or something. Sometimes, I actually find myself wanting to console the characters. Everyone goes through love kicking and fighting to understand. You display it here beautifully. Keep up the great work! It's hard to describe emotions, because all of the words in the world have been created outside the body.

I can't wait to read more!
person Millie Ishtar Motou
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O!! I don't mind hunting anyone down, let me get my hand gun my dagger and a pen knife and we'll be off
person supernerd3333
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Must resist urge to whack Kaiba on the head. Go Yami! Finally decide to end the thing. Cheer! Poor Bakura, he really had it bad. Hope they will sort out their problem soon. This is such a great fic. And I really like dark shipping. Can you please update soon? Pretty please?
person Yami Neferbre
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!! this is amazing, damn ur a good writer, can't wait for more ^_^
person Sugarmoe
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good fic...I ove their personalities in it...can't wait for the next chapter!
person Laura
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one hell of a story! I love it, really. It's great. I hope you update very soon again...