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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I'm quite intrigued and look forward to your next update!
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. An ironic name indeed... considering what Malik actually means. I like this - the chapters are a little short, but that's okay - and I like your attention to detail. So, how will Marik react to having a dall completely under his control...it can't even move without him. It would be ironic as hell if this was the doll he was replaced with...because that means that it took all the beatings obviously meant for him.
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update update update !!!!!!! Oh and don't give me the toaster just the monkey. otherwise i'll toast the monkey!
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Malik-san! Your fic is very good. But one suggestion...write more! XD, I'll be following this one! Love you!
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter there . . . good description. Can't wait for more.
DracOnyx
DracOnyx
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds intresting, please up-date soon.
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is cool. Update asap!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far it looks good enough to have grabbed my attention : ) Update soon : )
DracOnyx
DracOnyx
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Kind of reminds me of I, Robot. But in a very good way. Please continue.
Maggiemay
Maggiemay