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Ooh! Ooh! It's Yami! It's Yami!

OOOOOH how cute this story is! I love it and I think you got the idea for the story from that chapter of Dolls where the old park performer finds the one headed for the scrapper right? Or maybe the one about the customizers living next door to that neglected kid or the one guy who wanted his doll to be human, or maybe....*Gets malleted by all four of her muses* "SHUT UP! God! Not everyone has actually read Dolls you know, leave some frickin' mystery for the poor unfortunate shmucks who still haven't gotten their hands on it!" "She likes your story alot and is avidly awaiting an update, She also adores how Malik is the Doll, however we are all wondering just what is Oxymoronic about Malik's name? We humbly request that you update and inform us when you do."

*Regains consciousness* My vote is Seto Kaiba and Otogi (Duke Devlin). They ARE the electronic geniuses after all, and Marik hates Kaiba. *Passes out again.* @_@

im not sure if da 3 days r up but my comp crashed
so if u still want 2 draw i think id like a malik and marik one...if u dont mind
i dont really care i just like da story
update soon!!!

Brilliant! *hugs author* write more soon nien?

Its probably Seto and Jounouchi(and or mokuba) I wouldnt put it past you besides seto is the so called genious in electronics and i cant picture yami and yugi doing it cause their more of game people *plus we all know baku and marik hate his gutts* lol anyways hurry up with the next chapter or i shall not give you a really really nice link of yugioh doujinshi YAOI doujinshi lol anyways gatta go ja mata!

Ok i just had to say this. ive been reading this for a while and i really like it (GOOD JOB!) anyways... i just found one of my Dresden Dolls CDs and they of course do the song 'Coin Operated Boy' and it reminded me of this story. (coincedentally when i went back to re-read said story there was an update) i just thought id share that...

Great chapter! poor Marik!! XD

lets see..guessing either Yami and Yugi or Seto and Mokie...

This story just keeps getting better, but DAMN UR EVILNESS!!! >< I wanna see what happens nooowwwww!! **whines**......well, ok, be that way ^.^. OH! I have a guess!!! It might be Yugi and Yami cuz to keep up with the Yami/Hakari trend, OR I think it might be Kaiba Seto and Jou!!! I mean he really is a billionare (sp?) an stuff so that might be the real reason for the O.O expression on Marik's face, so I wanna guess Kaiba Seto and Jou(as a doll or reversed!) since Yami and Yugi are too obvious....but then again that might be the right answer! >< damn it, oh well, I'll stick wit Kaiba/Jou cuz they are hot an need to get in the story!! ^.^ Thanx for the chapter and I hope that the new one comes out SOON!! For now, Buh-BYEEZ!!!!!!!!

~Rinni

MASTAAAAA!!!!

Get off your lazeh bum and write more! ;-; I mean, why do you like to torture me!? I wanna see more... and read more. Stop tellin' meh you're writin' when you aren't! Gawd!

-Wails and curls..- Mastaa disappoints Daaku... even if the storeh is wondahful, you need to write more. ._.

-Sniffles and hugs.- Still luff you...

Always!

~Daaku-pet!