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for Baku, Ra, to Ringu: UnCut

by KimyouTeki

person anon yaoi fan
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story and full of lemon goodness, me likey. yaoi forever.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was different. I've never read a lemon that actually made me want to cry. It was sad, beautiful and almost bittersweet. Very well done.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God...*drool* I LOVE seme Ryou and forceful too....*more drool*

Yami Silvershadowfire: *Comes in, changes drool-sponge, leaves.*

Excellent smutty lemon! As for the next pairing...hmm. Me always love YxYY, or Bakura and Marik...or Bakura/Marik/Ryou/Malik foursome... *hentai smirk*

Whatever you decide, I'll be here!
person DominaDeNox
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is creatively written and very finely detailed. I'm just waiting for those lemons, though... *grins and licks lips*
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoot! Uncut version!

Yes, this is Silvershadowfire and her yami from FF.net, here to review you. If you don't want us reviewing again, or we're being annoying, just send us an e-mail and we'll only review the lemons. ;)

Anyway, did we tell you how much we loved the line about the spinal fluid the first time round?