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WOW!!! From the very start the plot got me, first I thought a long story would get slow after a while, but yours was very hard to stop reading(stayed up till 3:43am) is hard to find a good story with a riveting plot and lots of lemons... YES!!!! Please write more for us, your readers....

ABOUT BLOODY TIME!!! *grins and applauds giving a bow *One of the better fics out there, sincerely. It is a shame to only have 8 reviews on here. Anyway Excellent work, magnificant story. I had been waiting a year and a half for it to finally end. At times I had thought you had given up on it. Thank you for sticking it through. GREAT STORY!!

Yamimi: Just finished reading it, bravo
Yami Minature: I didn't like it!
Yamimi: 'MINI' DON'T BE RUDE OR I'LL STAB YOU WITH A BARBIE PIN!

An excellent ending to an extraordinary story. I'll admit that most of the time I've been a silent reader, but it wasn't because I didn't like it, I just didn't have much time. I'd like to say that that was the ending I was hoping for. That way, everyone came out happy. I also hoped that if Cecelia couldn't accept Croquet as part of the equation, Pegasus wouldn't abandon Croquet, especially with all they had gone through. I really liked the part where Pegasus had to deal with Yami in his head. Now at least he's had a taste of what Yugi and Ryou have with their other selves. I hope you write a sequal, or another Pegasus/Croquet/Pegasus fic.

*grins* I've got another introspective Pegasus fic that implies a growing relationship between Pegasus and Croquet in the works. I should have it up sometime soon. (In case you are wondering, you did review the previous one some time ago. It's called 'Train of Thought'.)

i can't belive that u finished this story.
I'm so glad.
The ending was so sweet.
Are u going to write a sequal?
You should becouse there is a feeling that it's not the end.
Hope to read more of your works soon.

unique...original... WONDERFUL. I stayed up all night reading it. You are so good. Maggiemay

AWE!!! that ending was soooo cute! and -giggles- the threesome there was perfect -nods- very good. anyway...this was an excellent fic! -glomps- and i'll be checking what i have saved to see if it was messed up or not. -nods- anyway! wonderful job! i'm so glad you finished it!
~Leaf~

This is fabulous. Simply fabulous. I've been reading this for about a year now. Leaf got me started on it, and it's made me fall in love with Pegasus/Croquet. This was a marvel to read, and as well as the other two stories you have from this line. I can only hope for more little random "bits", or whatever. Brilliant.
~Abby

I loved the story and am a Moody Blues fan as well. It's intereseting you chose that song to use for the title. I don't know if you know this but Justin Hayward, the lead singer of the band, had an illigetimate son when he was a teenager. His girlfriend and he gave the child up for adoption, knowing that two kids couldn't possibly give a baby the life he deserved. Justin wrote the song "I Know You're Out There Somewhere" in honor of his son, hoping that one day, the boy would find out about his adoption and seek him out.

Great tale and hope to see more from you!!!

-glomptackles- errors? that means i have to resave the whole thing on my computer! -falls over- oh well -waits eagerly for the last two chapters- THAT's what i wanted to read!!!!!! -giggles-
~Leaf~