rate_review Reviews

Hey, Maris! So sorry it has taken me so long to review this. I guess I've been caught up in my own writing and I just thought: "Hey, she reviews mine, I need to return the favor", especially after the thing with "UkeSeto". I apologize for that again, and thank you for your graciousness.
Now to the review. Come on, how could someone not review this story (even if it is belated)? This story is way wicked hot, it's well-written, the characters are developed and true to form, and it's got humor, darkness, sex, and drama all together, while still maintaining a faint undercurrent of love. That's hard to do, and you do it to a "T". This story is great, and I hope those nine bunnies get written soon.
Thanks again for your reviews to my stories and I hope you appreciate mine to yours! Keep up this excellent work! This my favorite YamixSeto story that I have ever read, and it inspires me so much!

~RayeMoon

AHA! That was so friggin' hott! Man, I love it! Yeah, I'm typically a Seto/Yami fan, but something about a Uke Seto is soooo...what is the word I'm looking for, delicious. Oh, and who better to subdue him than Yami! The only person who can lick that Kaiba at everything. You did a wonderful job on this fic. I was smirkin and heated the whole time. Now I need to go cool off...

Yamimi: The thought of Seto naked still makes Mim SICK! But it's a good story, I like Yami in this one of course...

Yami Minature: Of course you do, that's why you searched endlessly for me! (Hugs Mim's Finger)

Yamimi: OH MINI, YOUR SO CUUUUTE!.......HEhe, just had a tender moment, Write more, your a fine author (Smiles)

That was a great story that you wrote. It had so much detail and I was intrigued by reading it. You protrayed the characters very well. Please email me when you write other stories dealing with Yami X Kaiba and Priest Seto X Pharaoh Atemu.

OOOOH! Thank you thank you! *bows* I loved it so much and i'm sure lots of Uke Seto fans did too1 XD

I really loved this! I loved the progression of Yami's thoughts, how what attracts him is Kaiba's (as you said) indomnible spirit. And the line that he wasn't the former, but the next Duel Monsters champion was great -- funny and in character. And I like Yami's realization that he doesn't just want Kaiba, he loves him, and the sort of struggle between this half crazed lust and his growing realization that he doesn't want to hurt Kaiba. And his words to Kaiba at the end were just beautiful -- because it would be exzactly what Kaiba needed to know -- that (in spite of the last line of the story) this wasn't about winning, about being beaten, but about being cared for.

Lovely job. The lemon itself was very hot -- and more intense because you ttok the time to weave in the characters emotions.

I don't usually like Yami with anyone but Yugi, but wow, that was so hot, and somehow sweet in their own odd way of dealing with one another.

Great read! Thank you.

Kaiba's voice was dripping with cockiness. Yami shuddered at the mental picture that came to his mind.

LOL I giggled like a schoolgirl as I read this. I normally don't read Yugi fics, but this was good. Keep up the great work!!

~The One and Only

hothothothothothothothothothothothothothothothothothothothothothothot......HOT! I never read a yami/seto fic but I am so glad i chose this fic as a starting place. I think they'll be a favorite yaoi couple of mine now. This fic was soosososo good and intense!

This was fantastic!! Yami's lust, Seto's hesitation and then submission, the sexy shadow realm action...all were executed wonderfully. I especially enoyed the little follow up at the end. It was too cute! Great job!! ~Jade