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by nixwilliams

person obsessionprof
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This adds a nice look into the other story. I'm still curious about the man that Mokuba had sex with outside of the club. I liked the repition here. Blah, I'm all tired now and I can't think of anything really great to say. Sorry!
person naboo the enigma
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh, nooooooooo, poor seto! the last line just killed me. but that's your intention, isn't it?! ..... (and you see, *this* is why seto could never be the slut king - he has a "favourite", a soft spot, someone he gives preference to above everyone else. and don't everyone here just love it!!)
person S-J
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing.

Characterisation of Seto is amazing.

*in awe*
person mercynre
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeal! I can't believe you reviewed my story (Protesting the Conflict in Iraq)... that totally made my day, because I am such a fan of this one...You're a great writer and very creative... I love the angst... though I'm soooo sad that Mokie cut his hair. Mokuba/Seto is my favorite pairing of all time, can't wait for more updates!
person mercynre
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oops... I left that comment under the wrong story... But I really do like this one too. Update soon!
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squee* i just watched a mokuba-chasing seto on a motorbike (in noa's virtual world) hiLARious! ... thanks praiseofshadows (as always) for R&Ring, glad you liked it. i tried to give some reason to seto's behaviour, but also let him have different story. i get a bit sick of fics where it swaps between the two main characters, and they're both obsessed with each other in the same way (not that we aren't -all- obsessed with mokuba/seto, but, you know!!!). it gets a little tedious becuase it's like, "he wants you, you want him, GET IT -ON- FOR FUCKS SAKE!... or at least TALK!"... once again, i think i'm showing my lack of patience (o! drabble! you queen among fics!)... and i'm also RAMBLING. so, enough from me! more from you!
person whitesakura
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How did I miss this drabble? I love how you've shown Seto's vulnerability while he tries to deny it - it's just very Seto. Keep up the good work! =)
person praiseofshadows
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. MY. God. I _love_ your Seto (especially how much he loved shoving Mokuba into the wall XD). This is just _amazing_. (I'm sorry...I'll try to think of some better feedback later). Oh, and chapter 9 of "Wait For You Forever" is once again, pure brilliance! =D