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I LOVE IT! MORE!!

Kuro

Wow, I love it!
Great Job!

Hi! I just wanted to say, "Wow...that was very powerful...". I really enjoyed your one-shot...not that I like pain or rape but the message behind it. It shows another side to the Ryou/Bakura relationship, like the fact that their relationship isn't as strong as some depict. I also like how well you incorporated the song. Nice touch!

Is there going to be more of this? That's all I need to know--and believe me, I really do need to know.

Hummm...Hi. Not really my kind of thing. But I do like it. Interesting. May be asking the obvious, but...Bakura wants Ryou to stand up to him? Meet him halfway and show he is a true partner? I'm a bit dense...but is that correct? If so, are you going to do another chapter, maybe where Ryou snaps and rapes Bakura? that would be interesting...and balanced.

Ouch...I was actually hoping that Ryou would fight back at the end.... he had been passive..I would have liked to see him have had enough and being aggressive..but it was very well written!