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for Tale of the loyal

by Row

person Draza
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, your a really good writter. just started reading it today! You MUST write more. I wish yugi didn't have to die. in the naime Seto Kaiba changes the destiny that ishizy fortold for him, why can't yugi and yami chnage the future that
horus fortold for them? you? like a surprise thing or something!!! *cries* i don't want one or the other to die!!!
person Nanamika aka \'\'The Messenger of Hope and Destiny\'\'
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's a real good story! And I've read your other storys, too.
I just luv Yami x Yugi!

But there was a little spelling error (in your other FFs too): It's called Hikari, not Hikiri!

Hope you update soon!!


And please, don't let anything too bad happen to Yami or Yugi *pleading eyes*
person Sarah Costa
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...will Yami be ok? What happen next? Please update as soon as you can. ja ne.
person Yami Seirei
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh i love this story ^_^ *huggles tight* EVERYONE HAS TO REVIEW THIS cause this fantastic wonderfil and bloody brilliant authoress got deleted from a certain fanfiction.net for reasons which were not revealed HUMPH! aaaaaanyway she also happens to be my Yami and i wuv her to bits so don't be stingy review and help us kick fanfiction.net up where the sun don't shine! grr...

Anyway I'm not supposed to have evil thoughts i'm the hikari! but their actions demanded it.. *stomps off to stab fanfiction.net with the Millennium Rod*...... *looks at rod* huh? where this come from? *looks round* OH! cheers Malik!! >:)
person neferu
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, i hope that yami and yugi find a way to be together in the end, this is so sad in parts, but good too, where will this one end? please please please update soon, yami and yugi are made for each other, please continue soon ^_^