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for Tale of the loyal

by Row

schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate you. hate you. I hate. How the HELL could you do that!?
person Liz
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice opening to your new story and for Tale of the Loyal nice to see the 'Brothers' meet again
person Maggiemay
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello

I enjoyed your story very much. Even if it is not yaoi. Thank you for the good read.

Maggiemay
person Draza
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woohoo!!! EPILOGE!!! *does happy dance* and spoiler!! *snickers*
person Neko Kittie
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this storie was so great i cried so much at the end, and im not one to cry. to took 2 hours for everyone to settle me down. and when i told them what made me cry they were all like awwww. and if i could i would show you that my favorite shirt is now soak in tears with snot all over it. anyways your storie is great, i love it
person Liz
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*teary eyed* what a wonderful story. Someone have a hankie.
You are a surberd writer hope you write more stories like this one.
You should write a story for a different anime next time.
person Draza
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* *sniff* you should do *sniff* a sequel...*sniffs again and starts to cry*
person Sarah Costa
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* Yugi... *crying* Whhy?!?! *sobs* Please...post more stories....*grabs a tissue* Ja
person Liz
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You may think its for your own enjoyment but i love it. its a really touching story and you have captured the characters very well. please update soon this would have to be one of my favourite stories.
person SilverWingedSeraph
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*throws a temper tantrum* Darnit! ;_; I was really, really getting into the story, but now I have to wait for the next chapter. Really good story. I like it alot. ^^ Bring on the chapters!