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for Tale of the loyal

by Row

person Jenivi7
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful. sad, but beautiful.
person Arainaina
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was a very good story I really liked but it was sad that Yugi had to die any way very good
person FullofDarkness
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sooooooooooooo sad! Why did Yugi have to die? Yami should have been able to save him! At least they were reunited. Please continue to write storys, but maybe try writing a happy story with tons of fluff! Great job.
person Otaku
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SNIFF WHY?
Why couldnt they live happily.Whyd you have to kill yugi.
WHY?*COntinues to cry*."your so mean".
Youre story HAD A HORRIBLE ENDING.Put that ending right next to rosaenes show ending.
What kind of horrible mean girl are you.That wasnt a happy ending it was just some rip off.To please the angered masses.I say we have an alternate ending.Please.
And i dont like present yugi.I like slave yugi better *sniff why*?
person bakkuratwin
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD THIS WAS GREAT......*cough* sorry. lol this was great, it sooo made me cry. and this intro to your new fic, you started it yet? please say you have. if you haven't i will kill you. this has to be one of my all time fav's please keep writing. i am now going to look at your other fic's. see ya.
person anon
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic, please continue your great work. ^_^
person Vampireyami
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was good, 5 star. poor yugi. but i am glad you gave it a happy ending. please continue writing, Yami/Yugi FOREVER
person dark knight
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic. please write more, your a great writer
person angel ryou
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it. will be added to my fav's keep going. *am now going to check what else you have written* and your new fic sound's interesting. will keep an eye out for it.
person ferocity
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* DAMN YOU!! you made me cry! Time is ever flowing...is that shit profound or what!!
oh god i cried like a baby whe he died.

*snifs*
hoping to read more from you.
-ferocity